Reading through old chemistry texts, Twilight uncovers an old science paper detailing how to make a portal.
Using Chemicals. And electricity.
Needless to say, things don't work out quite as expected.
Originally written as a writing assignment for a chemistry class, I decided it would be good enough to be posted here just for laughs, so expect some out of character ponies, science, and a sliver of human self-insert.
Try to spot the clever uses of basic chemistry vocabulary while your at it!
Great story! So much buildup and palpable tension, and then some random human appears and disappears. I really liked it so far, but did you have to end it so early?
I think this could use a second chapter.
Poor guy got to finish his sentence
I posted a comment.
Wonderful read.
Whole time I was thinking of the XKCD t-shirt saying "Stand Back! I'm going to try science"
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Ha, I wrote this in a matter of hours for a chemistry class.
This was just a one-shot, but if I can come up with something else, I'll post it.
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Congratulations.
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For Science!
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1360966Thank you for congradulating me.
Who else read the description in GLaDoS's voice?
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What kind of chemistry class lets you write fanfics???