Previously, the main six and nine ponies from future Equestria managed to defeat and somehow 'kill' Yin-yang who in his final moments was somehow happy that he was dying. And now, the group is face to face with his father, The Creator.
"I apologize for not being fully aware of Yin-Yang's involvment in your world. By the time I had realized what it was he was trying to accomplish, you were already in his cave. And at that point, it was far too late." The Creator said.
"Maybe it's not too late to fix our world though. You are his father after all and The Creator." Sprout said.
"Trust me, if it was really that simple, I'd be all too happy to do so. And yet, I'm afraid my son has done the unthinkable." The Creator said.
"What exactly did he do?" Applejack asked.
"Not only did Yin-Yang cause your times to collide, but he also locked the ability to undo all of this behind his powers and his powers alone; knowing full well that your Discord would point him out as the culprit and essentially lead to his demise. As much as I want to help, the lock my own son placed on the collusion of your two time periods won't budge even for the likes of me." The Creator said.
"That bucking maniac!" Starlight said.
"So...there's nothing we can do now? We're stuck in this time period for good now?" Sunny asked.
"I'm afraid so. It would take a thousand of your years before his powers would reincarnate. By that point, you would all have passed on. This is unfortunately out of my non-existent hands now." The Creator said.
"What are hands?" Rainbow Dash asked.
"Hmph...wouldn't you like to know?" The Creator said before leaving.
"...I guess if even The Creator can't help us, then there's not much for it; you are all stuck here." Twilight said.
"It's not all bad. I actually get to hang out with the ponies my father would tell me stories about. There's a silver lining with all of this after all." Sunny said.
"Speak for yourself; now I can't rule over the Pegasi." Haven said.
"The flight team me and Soarin are making could use a manager though." Rainbow Dash suggested.
"...I shall think on that..." Haven noted.
"I'm sure there is something we can all do. But we don't have to figure it out right away. We have plenty of time after all." Alphabittle said.
Definitely liked the dialogue and characterizations in this chapter. Appreciated the Creator's explanation as well as the reason he can't just return the G5 ponies to their own time (and, yeah, out of that whole group, only Twilight knows what hands are, given her experience with the human world [though here is the best clue I can provide: they're not THAT different from the claws that dragons and griffons have]). And, I am glad that the G5 ponies were able to find a silver lining to their situation.
On to the final chapter.
So basically for anybody who ever watched Doctor Who it's kind of like how the Weeping Angels teleport you to the past and basically you are stuck there for good
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Oh wow that sucks for the g5 ponies so The Creators said that because of his son action they basically are stuck here in this timeline for good there life will never be the same but Twilight and the others will help them get though this together
This was a decent story, and then suddenly there's a god they gotta fight....not too bad.... and the entire fight is 'a bunch of attacks were made'....that's it, the whole description of the fight, aside from some comments.... I mean, this is a GOD that Discord himself doesn't stand a chance against......and a buncha ponies, only 2 of which have alicorn powers....destroy his body?... no idea why people like it so much, the first part, i can understand, but not as soon as the god is revealed....as well as the cop-out in the final chapter just to not fix anything and allow for a sequel with all the actual good bits in it
So, it is with a heavy heart, I put my first ever dislike on this site to this story
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I'll admit without full context the fight with Yin-yang doesn't make a lot of sense and I will admit I didn't space out the dialogue properly. Live and learn and all that right? Which I did when I decided to make the Zanth Soul fight in a more recent submission where the dialogue was spaced out a lot better so the fight can be seen to last as long as I wanted people to imagine it lasting which I tried and failed to do with Yin-Yang admittedly.
Although the whole "A bunch of ponies destroy the body of a god thing when discord couldn't do a thing" is unfortunately a byproduct of Yin-Yang being part of my own personal universe's rogue's gallery of villains and it being a meme that a bunch of mortals; ponies or otherwise; are able to defeat him whereas more powerful characters such as Discord and The Creator peace out on fighting him.
Though let's be fair, Discord would probably just want to sit back and watch the chaos of a bunch of ponies fighting a god anyways.