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Before she moved to Ponyville, Sparkling Medley, AKA Sparkler, lived in Kilihima Village located in Saddle Arabia. These are the tales of her younger years. Told in storytime format by Sparkler, Flappy, and her parents to their friends.


This story is a milestone achievement story set in the universe of Sparkling Harmony. IE every time any Sparkling Harmony story reaches a milestone in upvotes, I'll release a new chapter.

Make sure to hit the upvote button on all Sparkling Harmony stories if you want to see this particular story continue!


Cover made by: SuperSamYoshi - Fimfiction

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 51 )

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There's your problem with the cover art. It has to be much smaller to upload correctly.

Comment posted by Captain_Cosmos deleted Apr 13th, 2021

“Hi Ms. Nook.” Sparkler said nervously. “Uhm...sorry about this. I-I’m just trying to avoid being egged today. More than usual.”

"Hi, Ms. Nook, sorry for hiding in this nook, but I want to learn every nook and cranny of the flight, could you help?"

I thought that nook also had other meanings, but when I looked it up, I realized I could not expand the joke and keeping it T-rated.

Sparkler smiled as she nuzzled Kicker in the cheek. “Too bad you don’t have wings. I’d love to teach YOU how to fly.”

Time for some breezies' wings?
The spell is on page twenty-seven of the spell book, if I remember correctly.
Ask Twilight, she knows the one.

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I was wondering when I'd see a comment from you on this story. Hehe.

Breezie's wings...I'll have to play around with that.

And while we're on the subject...Have you checked out Something Sparkling yet?

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It was in my RIL for a while, I've been loaded lately. I had to read like 100k words in half a month.

I've not read it yet, since I should read the prequel first. So no promises here..

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Ok. No pressure. Just get to it when you can. Me and my co-author would really like to hear people’s opinion on it.

Loved it. And techically, she had friends, just did not knew it.

Galvin, makes me think of rdr2

“I’ll try.” Today should be better since I’m now gonna have an actual friend in that joint.

Sparkler! Where did you learn such a word at 6 years old?!

Much to his horror, all three ponies shook their heads. “You’re her first ever friend, little fella.” Mrs. Joy said.

Way to put burden on Flappy's shoulder, that's for sure.

“It does.” Ms. Nook said. “And it’s been going on from day one.”

Day one would really be interesting to see. How they went from "woah, she has horns and wings" to "let's pelt the horned chicken!"

“Squawk! Ooh. Please do! Those featherbrains are long overdue to get their just deserts. Squawk!” Flappy responded.

while I'd like to have a personal desert, I think you meant dessert.

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I keep getting that word mixed up. Hehe.

Thanks for catching it.

And a story from day one. That gives me an idea for the next one.

by worse i can probably guess what it was

also you need "its" instead of "it's" for when Flappy is told why ponies hate Sparkler

Nicely done and nice cameo of lucky!

Heh, no doubt hanzal and candy in a group with her would have worked/both enjoyed. Though, hanzal would be extremely nervous. And trying to admit his crush in secret i guess

I’ll pass out the rubric but your grade will be based on contribution, readiness, and energy during the performance.

Hey, you're penalizing slow music, that's not fair!

“Maredosa” smiled as she began to morph. She shrunk, and turned into Flappy, finally dropping that disguise.

That's changeling level of camo there. Her dad must know some tricks

very nice but even on holiday they have to attack here? I guess her having had candy and Hanzal makes this the more better for her

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She didn’t have them yet. At this point in time they are not in Saddle Arabia.

“Just an assignment from Mr. Rhythm.” Sparkler responded. “Attempt something you’ve never done before.” She said.

I know this should sound encouraging and uplifting, but can I add it also sounds terribly dangerous?
That's also what they said of Rihanna "Try Everything" Zootopia song

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Mr. Rhythm isn’t dumb. He also made sure to tell his students to do something SAFE.

But this is through kid Sparkler’s perspective. So of course we get her version, which has the assumption of common sense

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Not asking anything to add, but how is this type of backstory?

(it will take a while but Id like to know what you think of it. And it is original, nothing stolen. I thought of it on my own)

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Erm...I'm sorry I'm not quite sure what you're asking.

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(I forgot the name, lets just go with Dust Shine)

Dust shine is stallion pony who lives an ordinary life in Ponyville. But he has a deep secret.
He is an alicorn and has been keeping it a secret from Equestria for a good reason.

He was born as an alicorn in a village, but his parents kept it a secret because he came with powers that are stronger that Celestia and Luna themselves.
They were also afraid that evil creatures could use for his powers, because 'With great power, comes great power hungry bad guys.'

Years later.
Dust Shine couldn't remember how his parents died and his grandma passed away a few years later when raising him on her own.
He was told to keep it a secret for the rest of his life because nopony and creature must know about it.

He took care for himself for 7 years (moons?) until 1 day would change his life forever and he would learn the horrible secrets of his past.


How is that?

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Like I said, it would take a while.
And it is original or a coincidence.

I hope college goes well for you and very nice work!

Heh, I imagine Hanzal would have been dead worried about her back then and extremely nervous at the serious talk

great chapter i wondered what exactly went down that day

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Lot of angry ponies. That's for sure. Heheh

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I will eventually read this.

Sparkler was not in fact fine, she hadn’t been fine since the previous night nearly saw her end. Sparkler walked the streets of KiliHima, having decided to run away. Never again. She told herself as she used her hoodie to conceal her face and her wings, hoping to avoid recognition.

Where IS that cloaked guy that was supposed to keep an eye on her?
Both now, and when she almost suicided?

That of course sparked an outrage with the students. After Mr. Rhythm got them to settle down, he spoke again. “We are done messing around. If you cannot treat another student the way you want to be treated, which, by the way is rule #1 here at Kilihima school, then you can deal with the consequences of those actions. This decision is final.” He announced. “Now, onto today’s lesson.” He said as he started teaching like he didn’t just drop the hammer hard.

I still don't understand how she survived the remaining years in that school.
After all that, the anger towards her should have escalated exponentially....

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A certain parrot being allowed by her side after that helped a lot.

great chapter wonder what is going to happen next time on sparkler ball z

And that got tears to come out of Sparkler’s eyes as Galvin just laughed. “In fact, I doubt they’re even your real parents. It’s more likely your parents are a pair of chickens.” He added.

now that is just

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I mean...Techically he's right. They're only her adopted parents.

That's still not nice to say though.

“Yeah.” Bradford said. “And meanwhile I had just gotten yelled at by Lampshade and sent to clean out my locker since I was expelled and being transferred to boarding school.”

ooooh🙁

“And that was what is now referred to as the Crash of the Hammer.” Maek said.

Mark

Nice toy Story reference and mentioninf of autunm

Great chapter wonder what is gonna happen next time on sparkler ball z

“I Can’t go through that again Flappy. I just can’t.” Sparkler responded as she lit her horn, and a sweater appeared over her wings, hiding them from view.

cant she just turn her wings invisible?

“And that’s when mom met her roommates. A pegasus named Cozy Glow and an Earth Pony named Autumn Leaves…Huh, I wonder if Mom ever noticed they both have Mommy Twi’s mane and tail style.” Sprinkle commented.

COZY GLOW!!!!!!?
https://images.app.goo.gl/jtthXp28edzLMhj17

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And yes she could, but the sweater is less magic intensive. And you never know what may happen with magic

Comment posted by MatTheBook deleted Nov 23rd, 2022

“And that’s when mom met her roommates. A pegasus named Cozy Glow and an Earth Pony named Autumn Leaves…Huh, I wonder if Mom ever noticed they both have Mommy Twi’s mane and tail style.” Sprinkle commented.

Ok, this is an AU Cozy Glow, I get it.


Still I cannot shake it off the feeling everything's gonna go bad very quickly

Also, sorry, but I won't read smut.
See you when you get back to the main stories!

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I am back to the main stories now. Heheh.

Working on a Season 3 chapter now

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