This story is a sequel to You Will Never Be Alone
After the Fall Formal, Sunset found the one thing she always wanted. A family. She got a loving mother, a great aunt, a sweet little sister, and the kindest soul in the world, who is her girlfriend. But her journey is not over yet. Let's see, where her destiny will bring her while finding out some secrets of the elements of harmony, that no one knew before.
Not really shocked. And interesting on how this is how the chapter starts.
How can you “just remember”? That should be something that’s on your mind for a long time.
I wonder how common it is for people to date their ex-bullies?
Damn, I can make tons of jokes out of this.
Wow, even in another dimension angel is still a demon. Probably more of a demon than sunset was when she put on the crown.
Ok, usually I would condone lying, but not in this situation.
I just realized something, didn’t celestia and luna know about the bullying before the fall formal?
I actually didn’t even know the last story was finished until I saw this, which was probably not even even 30 minutes after it was approved.
That part was actually from a song I heard named "who knows" by 4everfreebrony
They were in a friendly conversation so twilight might have forgotten it for the time being. She must have been very happy seeing Sunset call her.
Who knows,
Angel the demon bunny
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Yes they do
I made a blog post about it. maybe you haven't seen it.
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I'm glad you like the little add on's. I was hoping it wasnt to forced, because honestly that's what would be going through my mind if I was in Sunset position. And yes evil bunny forever.
A great start, I can't y to see where this goes! Keep up the good work!
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Which add on’s?
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Mrs.Shy throwing knifes at sunset, angel drawing a finger over neck, those things. They wasn’t there in the original. Moonrise added them.
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Thanks.
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Also, take a look at the song "Who Knows" by 4everfreebrony. That's the song, that based the conversation between sunset and twilight.
I spy a "Who Knows" reference at the beginning.
Ah, the dreaded meeting with the parents. Much worse what with being a former bully than a total stranger.
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Yup, you are right. It is a who knows reference.
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Ohh. That’s interesting.
Well now I know that sunset is dating fluttershy. Don't know why it took me so long to find out.
great first chapter il oved it
Ok, is me or did sunset’s iq drop by 35%?
Is she not surprised by that?
Oh no, I think I see where this is going.
What misunderstanding?
Does either celestia have a serious voice?
It’s pinkie don’t question it.
Is that what sunset texted pinkie?
SUV, a classic family car.
Now I’m starting to wonder what car luna has.
Damn, was fluttershy’s song that boring?
They’re sleeping beauties until one of them starts drooling.
Damn, I would hate to be in the back seat. They may be sleeping beauties when they’re asleep, but when they’re awake, not so much.
What does that look like?
Damn, then how old are celestia and luna?
Damn, she got that dog hearing?
I love this mother. She seems like the type a person that’ll bake you cookies.
I think I know where luna got her personality from.
Don’t ever give her equestrian magic. She’s gonna be op.
Wouldn’t that mean there are four rooms or is my grammar bad?
Alright, where are they keeping that fountain of youth? I’ll interrogate them if I have to.
I’m willing to bet money his girl is a vehicle.
What kind of danger?
We all got that one family member that can cook it up in the kitchen.
I’m willing to bet they’re gonna take it well.
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For the misunderstanding, I think Celestia thought Sunset meant sleepwalking when she said dream walking
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Is she able to dream walk?
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So for context shes been talking with Twilight, so she knows a lot Luna's power to dream walking shes mentioning it in a joking matter. But Celestia isnt aware of that type of magic so she thinks Sunset is just being her funny self. She isnt telling anyone because shes worried what would happen to her and what people will think. Think of Twilight during the legend of everfree. She was scared about the magic she was given/experiencing. Also she fell asleep listening to Fluttershy's song because it was soothing and relaxing. I also will be making it to where this is the one song that Fluttershy is the lead singer. So she fell asleep listen to her love sing to her. It was suppose to be a heartwarming scene. Sorry for any of the confusion.
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Well, at least that answers a few of my questions.
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She's just afraid.
If you mean the flame appearing, no. Because she already know about that.
You do
Dream walking vs sleep walking
I think this is more like a mothers serious voice. You know. Also, there were times when princess celestia had a serious voice too.
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No, it's what pinkie texted to sunset when she thought she will always be pinkie
😅 yeah
I... don't ... actually know that much about cars. It will be a sports car, if moonrise decided ever specify it.
No, it was soothing. I think it felt like a lullaby.You know, with her soft calming voice.
😂
You know rule #31, check the back seat.🧟
You better ask moonrise that. He is the one that wrote that part and he would be able to describe it better.
Around 30's I think
Maybe she's excited to see sunset and snowdrop, she got super hearing.
Aren't all the grandma's.
😂
I... need... more... power😈
Oh yeah. I'll ask moonrise.
😂😅
Eeyup
I think he meant when he feels like they did something wrong and they are in danger. Same thing as when they are in trouble.
Oh yeah.
Let's find out in the next chapter.
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Afraid of what?
But, when did she figure out she could do that?
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It’s probably because I don’t take either celestia serious.
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I actually didn’t know that was a rule.
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They have to. The mother would probably be more excited than upset, and if I’m right about luna having the same personality as her father, then he’ll either be calm or not care.
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Afraid of her powers. That she was turning evil. Afraid that she'll harm her family.
It was a zombieland reference. Haven't you watched that movie. Because you definitely should.
¯\_(ツ)_/¯
We'll see
This was still good which is what counts
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Thanks.
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It's always best to think positive than negative
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Won’t that wind up happening anyways?
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Oh yea. It’s been so long.
I always thought they In their 40s or 50s.
Yes, we will.
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So the reason I didnt specify was because I was going to talk to you about whether or not if we wanted it to be a motorcycle that they both work on and Sunset grows to love motorcycles. But I was tired and wanted to sleep, that's why I dmed you earlier asking about a car.
This chapter was great, I only wish that it was longer.
I don't know about this.
Maybe I'll div add into it sometime next weekend.
Dang it. I meant Dive
Liking it so far. Enjoyed the previous story. Hoping to see Solar and Crescent bust out some of that 'Grandparent' magic. You know the magic that let's them know things that no one should know.
Great update! Looking forward to more.
Seeing sunset sing that song sure surprised me.
I very much enjoyed this you don't see to many stories about Sunset meeting her grandparents and her telling them about her the scene when Celestia hug her to calm Sunset down whispering to her.
Love the chapter 😘
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Thanks
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May ask why?
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I just like how you tell your stories i have read quite a lot of fanfics and most just try to cram so much of the plot in one chapter while you let you story plot flow slowly but not so slow that makes me think while reading " Man! That took so long"
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Thanks. I'll try to keep the pace same. Also, Moonrise helped a lot on editing and adding new parts to the chapters.
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She doesn't sing that song until after backstage pass came out
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Yeah, thought you'd say that. I know it is, but Suset did say it's a work in progress. And the only other song that sunset plays during this time, if not the only song sunset played before let it rain is my past is not today. I felt like that does not mix well with the situation here. So I chose let it rain, which was also played on a guitar.
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Ah I see
Glad to more updates! Since you mentioned Princess Celestia, I really hope we can get a nice reunion between her and Sunset someday.
Sunset has become the pony/person she wanted her to become, and I think just seeing what she has done, and all her friends would help heal a rift between them.
Hope to see more soon.
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Oh definitely but there's a little more to it than that. Stick around and I'll update soon.
So do you like the pase the story is going on? Is it rushed, slow or okay?
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The pace is good. Keep up the good work.
Well damn, I may need to test that.
That would be hard to do.
Why her?
That’s an understatement.
Luna, nows not the time. But you can do it later.
I mean, that’s a short way to put it.
How did she get the video? And how did no one post that on the internet?
She lost her parents?
Ok, is that new?
Why?
That’s actually not bad.
Wait, how old is sunset?
Damn, he drag races?
What capabilities?
Along with probably a few other things.
Knowing her, she might be able to hear the view.
I don’t see why.
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1.Good Luck.
2.just saying
3.eh, nothing special
4,5. Luna seems to agree.
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7.she can set the camera and play the song. Since it's between the girls, they wouldn't post it on the internet. Even if they did, they'd think it's edited.
8.She was in an orphanage before Celestia adopted her.
9.about the horn? no, it was there since the beginning of the story.
10.maybe it tickled. pony ears must be a little bit more sensitive than human ears.
11.I love that car. and I kind of added it as a reference to ''supernatural''.
12.no matter how old you are, you will always be a little kid to your parents. Especially to grandparents.
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14.like how powerful it is.
15. Which is?
16.hehe
17.read the next chapter.
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8. Yea, but I didn’t know she lost her parents. I just assumed they dropped her off there.
9. Really?
10. Oh yea. I forgot.
11. Really?
12. That’s true.
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14. Ohh.
15. Idk. That’s why I said probably, but who knows? I might think of some as the story goes forward.
16. I’m not wrong.
17. I definitely will when I get the chance.
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