This story is a sequel to Guarded Emotions: Old Ties
A collection of vignettes concerning what Captain Moonwhisper was doing during the episodes of Season 9.
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Alabenson
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Moonwhisper is going to destroy him. heehee
Oooohhhh boy... have to wonder what he'll do to Cozy.
Sombra: Who are you...?
Moonwhisper: I'm you, only WAY more badass.
Something tells me that Moonwhisper is going to be quite angry with Discord later...
Oh, Moonwhisper. Sweet summer child...
Yeah u updated!!!!!
lol awww that's cute and funny
So that's why Twilight was less uptight in Season 9.
Moonwhisper seems more relaxed too.
Princess of Friendship. With benefits!
Ooooo this looks like fun.
Well, that escalated quickly...
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Fun fact; I actually came up with the concept for Greater Good all the way back when writing the first Guarded Emotions story, but I kept editing him out.
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I wouldn't be surprised if Starlight used to be on Greater Good's hit list before her reformation.
In fact, I'm about 97% certain she was.
lol nice one. gj Moonwhisper
I feel like Moonwhisper rather enjoyed beating Shining Armor in Buckball.
A very well done chapter. I am enjoying how you are tying in background elements from the show into the story for the buildup towards the climactic episodes at the end of the series. Things that I had not thought of but seem obvious in hindsight, like that outpost at the base of Everhoof. All in all, it was well done except for a few editing errors here and there. In particular:
Other then minor quibbles, I really only have nice things to say about your characters and I think you’ve done a good job on this story. Well done.
Yeah, I could see Pharynx and Moonwhisper getting along alright.
“Friends”
Yeah... one of those cragadiles invaded the school, too. Can't imagine Moonwhisper would like that.
I wish I could “like” a story more than once.
Interesting. I did not see that coming.
Question: is this story your final addition to the Guarded Emotions Saga, or is there a planned continuation of the story after we reach then end of season 9?
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To answer your question, it is and it isn't. On the one hand, this story is going to more or less complete Moonwhisper's character arc, so on that level I don't anticipate having any further big, multi-chapter dramas focusing on him specifically. On the other hand, I do have several other stories that I want to write that would follow this, both those involving Moonwhisper directly and others that would be in the same continuity. In other words, this might be largely the end of the Guarded Emotions Saga, but it won't be the end of Moonwhisper.
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Glad to hear it!
Since I have your attention, I'll ask: How do you feel about other writers using Moonwhisper as a background character in their stories, assuming they respect the character? Is that something you would be okay with, or do you prefer that Moonwhisper stay within your purview? Asking for a friend.
Oh, Discord, it gets worse. If you die in the game, you die for real!
I like where this is going
I guess that means we know what his character arc for this part of the story is, then.
This.
This is pure gold.
A short but fantastic chapter. Well done
Full Metal Moonwhisper. Lol
LOL not even Moonwhisper can handle Twilight when she's "in the zone".
So, did nothing happen this chapter?
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Rarity and Moonwhisper had a talk in a train car. We learned that even Moonwhisper can't handle Twilight when she's "in the zone"
For a place that gets almost conquered so much, Equestria sure has horrible security
Life likes tormenting Moonwhisper, it seems.
Using glitter is just too cruel. Seriously. That sh*t gets EVERYWHERE, and it's impossible to clean up.
Ooooooo!! Cool idea!
I can definitely see how this ties in to Gallus' story later. We know he ends up being a Guard Captain in The Final Problem.
Single fatherhood's a major undertaking, Moonwhisper - are you sure you're ready for that?
Meanwhile in Starlight's office
Sunburst: And working in a school is what I always thought I'd do! I mean if you'll have me...?
Starlight? Are you kidding?? OF COURSE I'LL MARRY YOU!!! GYAAHHH er ummm, I mean... You're hired! Y-you're hired is what I said!
Oh, Twilight. NEVER say things like that...
Oh, Moonwhisper. You dear, innocent pony...
“It belongs in a museum!”
This explains why none of Sugar Belle's family were at the wedding. She does have a cousin she associates with. Glad you didn't forget him. That would be tragic.
So you're saying there's a chance?
Ah, so Moonwhisper gets to deliver a beatdown to Sombra after all!
Dad!Moonwhisper remains adorable. When's he gonna tell Twilight they have a son?
Uhh... I think that's a "No".
It has been an honor going on this journey with you and Moonwhisper, Alabenson. Thank you
I wonder what Moonwhisper and Twilight's descendants are up to in G5?
Maybe Sunny Starscout is one of them...