Diamond Tiara Is Your Girlfriend

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Join your Anon self as you avoid Yandere Scootaloo? and maintain a forced-ish relationship with the nicest girl in the Equestria girl's universe.

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Comment posted by tflex deleted Feb 25th, 2018

Shadowblade019

Shadowblade019 #2 · Feb 25th, 2018 · 4 · ·

This is terrible

FlutterDashFan18

FlutterDashFan18 #3 · Feb 25th, 2018 · 2 · ·

The story could use some work. I have no idea what the story was about and it didn't really have much plot. Try getting someone to edit it

tflex

tflex #4 · Feb 25th, 2018 · 1 · 3 ·

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That was the point...

FlutterDashFan18

FlutterDashFan18 #5 · Feb 25th, 2018 · 1 · ·

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The point?

tflex

tflex #6 · Feb 25th, 2018 · 1 · 2 ·

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The point was to write something random immediately it came to mind, basically integrating every idea somehow into the story.

FlutterDashFan18

FlutterDashFan18 #7 · Feb 26th, 2018 · 2 · 1 ·

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I don't mind stories being random but this story almost reached to the point of not making any sense. Here is a piece of advice. When writing something random, make sure the story is random but the story flows and makes sense. I don't know really. I'm not good with writing according to the fanfics I wrote here.

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