Twilight, with the help of her friends, will finally tell her feelings for the princess using a song
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ooooooohhhhhhhh the first twilestia i've seen... and a beautiful one at that i can tell you...![:twilightblush:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightblush.png)
Caaaan you feel the loooove toniiiight?
Trust Celestia to break that one out :P A decent enough little fic, short and sweet. Good job.
Me want the rythm for the song![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
63803 Army of the Sun and Can you feel the Love Tonight
It had been so long since I heard can you feel the love tonight, that I had to look up the lyrics to fid what song Celestia was singing, and then I had to look up the song itself to remind me of the tune![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
ah well, for a one shot this was very good
Solid concept. Watch your grammar and capitalization.
I think the lyrics of the song could have stood some more consideration-- is Twilight really a warrior, for example?
But the idea of Twilight singing a love song breaks my heart, Greengrass, it really does.
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None of the lyrics say that Twilight is a warrior, if you refer to the last part, Celestia is singing that.
The part twilight sings isn't as much as a love song as 'can you feel the love tonight' is. I had hoped that it that the readers understand that singing a song, or a love song, isn't exactly something twilight does alot or likes to do.
Nice.
I thought the first song seemed kind of odd for a serenade, somehow out of character for Twilight, but... Celestia's response? That's one of my all time favorite romantic songs. I can just hear her singing it. And it DOES fit. "It's enough for this restless warrior, just to be with you." Celestia, keeping Equestria safe for thousands of years. Hmmm... I like it.
This is seriously and singularly awesome.![:pinkiesad2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiesad2.png)
Nine of the twilestia fics I ever seen are as beautiful as this.
Such beauty and grace *sobs*
This is awesome. Just one thing. "Her heart boasted"? I have no idea what that would mean, since boasting isn't a feeling AFAICS. I suggest something like "Her heart leapt" or "Her heart jumped" or even possibly "Her heart twisted"
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Thanks you, and thanks for the advice. I'll change it ^^
Can I haz moar?![:fluttershysad:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/fluttershysad.png)
Daaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwww.
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I'm working on new twilestia one-shot, but that's been going on for a few months now so I don't know when It will be finished. But it will be longer and better!
I still love this fanfic :v