Applejack tries Applejacks. How does she like them? Read to find out!
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A good story. Just needs a little polish. Maybe vary your sentence structure a bit, it seems a bit... jerky.
I've never read anything like this before. Is there a name for this style of writing?
The story begins normal enough, but takes a turn towards crazy. The amount of detail describing each scene tappers, similar to one of those slippery slope kids stories.
By the end I found myself laughing from sheer inanity of the events. Nicely Done
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Thanks for the feedback!
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Thanks!
3336675 best...story... EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Thank you!
3365232 no problem!!
Random fanfiction, but great.
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Thanks!
3536448 You are welcome.
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Congratulations! This story has officially been deemed an Emerald by The Gem Hunters.
Slow down a bit, and you could have another Sapphire to add to your list.
I see a sequel in te future called "Big Mac eats a Big Mac"
Yo, dawg. I heard you like Applejack...
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Actually, I like Twilight the best.
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A Gem Hunter's Emerald
Awesome.
Is it only me that finds it a bit unsettling that Applejack is named after an ALCOHOLIC DRINK and thus a breakfast cereal for kids is named for an alcoholic drink?
Interesting, for sure...
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She'll GET YA DRUUUUUUUUNK!
Have you check out this one: Part of a Balance Breakfast