I had chapters 7 through 10 of Pearl's Travels all worked out and written down, ready for publishing, before my partner looked it over and went "...I'm confused."
So I rewrote chapter 6, scrapped 7~10, and am rewriting them (at a much slower pace -_-; ) so the story continues to make sense.
Sorry for the wait, guys...
Some people have decided to start reading my stories with critical eyes and are pointing out problems with them. THANK YOU for pointing them out!
Please keep sending me messages when you see something I can improve upon.
I'm still looking for dedicated editors to (p)review my story chapters properly.
Chapter 6 of Pearl's Travels: Canterlot has had some edits to add to the story's exposition.
It's especially noticeable in the last part, and I do hope it reads better now.
I'm listening to feedback I receive, but I don't always receive it on FIMFiction. Please do keep sending your constructive criticism my way, though.
A friend just got into reading KAPT, and noticed some issues with it...
Apparently I had started describing Pearl with a grey coat, due to her attempt to get close to a mother-of-pearl tone, only to then describe her as a green pony in later chapters...
So that's fixed.
There were a few spelling errors and some grammar she pointed out, so those are fixed...
The observant among you might have noticed I seem to have fallen off a cliff or something.
The reason is simple: My muse is a finnicky sort and I'm trying to hunt her down again so I may continue on the stories which are awaiting new chapters.
I am working on a rewrite of some parts of as-of-yet unreleased chapters of Pearl's story to smooth out some bumps, and hope that will continue soon again.
Does anyone know of an amber alert service for a missing muse?
I've sat through a heatwave the past week, so have done absolutely no writing whatsoever...
While it's going to get a tad colder again this weekend, the heat will return again next week. I'm not sure I'm going to be able to do much writing throughout it...
Update:
Okay, so the heat is going to keep down for a while longer. I'll try to write some more this week.
So I've posted the first five chapters of Pearl's Travels: Canterlot, a direct continuation of Kick Ass Pony Torrents.
I'm hoping to update this sequel regularly again. My muse is finnicky, so bear with me.