Rewrite/ editing complete · 4:28am Jan 20th, 2023
Chapters 10 and 11 have had their mid sized rewrite done and chapters after those have had edits for consistency and grammar
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Chapters 10 and 11 have had their mid sized rewrite done and chapters after those have had edits for consistency and grammar
Well thanks to randomly going on FIMFiction again I plan to try and continue Skyfall and will be making a change to it that shouldn't be all that big. I plan to change the sexual assault of Celestia to a beating because it still portrays powerlessness and I can write and portray it better now and anytime it is referenced and thinking on it I don't know why I chose something so extreme as I did anyway thanks to any who follow me and maybe I can see this to the end this time.
Am currently un able to send or respond to PM's I am not ignoring anyone I just can't PM anybody.
Sad to say I will be marking LDR as cancelled seeing as I have not done anything with it for months My big issue and fault was I did not write down Ideas nor plan like I should have and got myself stuck I still love the overall idea but I should have done more of a slice of life style story and maybe I will one day revisit it and do so getting rid or reducing the significance of the military guard part as that added too many characters for me to handle though I would keep most everything else
I do not do many if any of these blogs at all so if anyone is reading thanks. Well I do have one thing to say and that is I really am running dry for my story Life Death and Rebirth if anyone out there has ideas to help me out then send them right now any idea is better then what I have going right now. On the other side of the fence is Skyfall and so far so good though i really should start on the next chapter but I'm getting an idea of where I want to go with it well guys thanks for
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Radiant Dawn invited people to make stories in his universe and I saw it as a way to better my own writing so i will be making a new story (yes i over burden myself) I hope it helps me and that you my followers like it when it dose come out.
Sorry for not posting updates I am working on my stories Skyfall and Life,Death and Rebirth with LDR being my main focus it is a mix of lazyness and life that delays me but anyways if you have any ideas to help out with the story namely Skyfall tell me.
Well the title says it all, I am writing a new story that I believe will be much better and with less cliches, then Life, Death and Rebirth here is my short prologue (It still might be changed) and I am slowly working on chapter seven of Life.Death and Rebirth, hopefully it will be pretty unique or at least not as cliche
Prologue
100 years after the failed invasion of Canterlot the changlings are forgotten by all but a few, they have now adopted an omnivore diet consiting of manticore meat and plants gathered in the Everfree forest to make up for the lack of gathering love, 50 years earlier chaglings have invented gunpowder and have created muskets and flintlock pistols, they have also made great use of steam power. The changling queen Chrysalis has deemed it necessary to reemerge, the changlings are not the only ones
I am a new writer as most of you know so I could use some advice on how to better myself as a writer and my story also get some sugestions for what people would like to see in this story