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The Equestrian Herald

Brave Guards apprehend trio of criminals

Exclusive interview with Pvt. Red Tape, one of the five ponies responsible for apprehending the infamous griffon crime band known as the Forest Claws. For more details flip to pages 6 and 7.

Crime rates continue to plummet

In a recent report from Chief Justice of the Crown, the Equestrian Guard continues to measure less and less crime happening despite the country’s rapid expansion. For theories and statistics see page 8.

In historical turn of events, Crown approves griffon immigration

When asked, the lucky griffon, named Gavallo, refused to comment in detail. He merely claimed it was Harmony itself that wished to see him move to Equestria. See more on page 9.


A story which started out as merely an attempt to practice writing fight scenes.

Mildly inspired by (though completely unrelated to) the works of Captain Neckbeard.

Thanks to /fimfic/ and Equimorto for proofreading.

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It didn't take too long until the armies of the Endless Night reached a small tributary of Her Radiance's Crown, next to the far-reaching borders of the Heartlands. With its forces broken and ponies cowed, only a single fort remained between the Crescent Queen and an unshakable foothold into Equestria.

But where soldiers failed another force may yet prevail...


A ponyfic rewrite of The Bards of Wales.

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*SNAP*

A hypothetical mare hypothetically has a hypothetical choice to make.

The clock is ticking.


Won gold medal in Bicyclette's "A Thousand Words" contest in category "Angst."

Dramatic reading by The Mystery Fluttershy Fan.
Dramatic reading by Pony&Wolf Productions.

Thanks to Equimorto and various Anons for proofreading and feedback.

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Frayed Arrow never expected to discover a new species, let alone a sapient one. The Vespiquines - or "wasp ponies" as they're colloquially known - proved to be quite receptive to the idea of Harmony and rapidly integrated into Equestrian society.

There's just one thing about them that's eating her up inside.


This story was inspired by the following prompt: "How would you attempt diplomacy with a carnivorous species has to lay parasitic broods in other intelligent species who cannot survive the hatching process in order to reproduce?"

Thanks to Equimorto and various Anons for proofreading and providing feedback to the story.

Written for the "A Thousand Words" contest.

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Millennia after being banished from the face of Equestria, King Sombra stirs restlessly in his lightless prison, held alive only by his dark magic and the desire to take vengeance against the Elements of Harmony. Especially the one who sent him there.

Harmony, however, is an inscrutable force. One willing to grant him a second chance in a world far different from the one he remembers.

For now though, he only needs to head towards the light.


Many thanks to Equimorto for spending almost two months on meticulously proofreading and critiquing this story.

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Twilight stumbles upon a book of puzzles in her library. One that she doesn't remember ever owning, or buying, or even seeing before. But hey, puzzles are fun and she is very good at them.

What's the worst thing that could happen?

The story is set right before S2.

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A small band of guardsponies find themselves surrounded in their city. Their enemy already savors her victory, but she will learn that even the darkest night must yield to the Sun.

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Under the just guidance of the princesses, Equestria has prospered for thousands of years. Yet not a single soul remembers how the kingdom came to be or where its twin diarchs came from.

During a simple tea party, Princess Celestia decides to reveal the answers, causing Twilight to call into question everything she thought she knew about her mentor.


I'd like to thank the Anons of /fimfic/ for helping with my grammar and fixing some narrative-related issues. The story wouldn't be half as good without you!

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"To answer your question, no, they are in critical condition. Despite our best efforts, we expect that in less than forty-eight hours their body temperature will drop to a level that’s incompatible with life."


After Sunny Starscout and her friends restored magic and united the pony tribes once more, roads were built between the cities and a treaty was signed proclaiming a union between the three tribes, granting the right to all ponies to freely move and live in whichever part of the fledgling Equestrian Union they wanted.

The resulting economic and population boom forced the newly-forged nation to glance outwards at the massive stretches of unclaimed land that laid at their hooves. Soon teams of pegasus pioneers ventured outside the borders to broaden their horizons.

All seemed well, until one day a team arrived home in distress from their northward journey. Their rapidly-weakening bodies were covered in frost that didn't seem to melt, even though it was the middle of summer. None of them could give a good explanation what happened, other than that they experienced something terrible up north. Fearing the worst, the government decided that further investigation is necessary into this concerning phenomenon and there is only one group of ponies, who can fulfill this task.

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