Critique · 4:08pm Jan 7th, 2018
For any that want to, I would really appreciate when you read my story, to comment on what you liked/disliked about it, and maybe also tell me what you think would be improved, thank you.
For any that want to, I would really appreciate when you read my story, to comment on what you liked/disliked about it, and maybe also tell me what you think would be improved, thank you.