Hi everypony. I'm in the process of writing my first story and I need someone who can proofread and edit it for me once I finish chapter 1. Please help me. thanks. it will be a few days before I have chapter 1 finished

Let me know what you think. I Named her Lucky Rose and she is Princess Luna's daughter. also she was born before nightmare moon. she has the same cutie mark as her mother. she is my avatar pic. this is the first one I ever created.