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a random guy that might write a story or two.
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Well, it saw what it was, tried to explain the situation, and gave a good celestial monologue. It didn't stick out its toes, and I feel that it didn't overstay its welcome. A good story. I would say that the ending felt a bit rushed, and didn't solve the underlying problem, but that is more personal preference then actual critique.
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