After learning of the great support some of my readers gave this story, I felt obligated to improve the story a bit.

I fixed some errors, rearranged some sentences, and changed the ending a bit.

If you have some time and would like to have a quick laugh at this new development, feel free to read the story again, the changes though aren't that huge, just minor details.

For every new reader, enjoy the story with some humor.

Read More

High up in the Towers of the Crystal Castle of the Crystal Empire, Celestia stood facing the Throne of the Emperor, looking smug like he alway's does with his green and violet glowing eyes.

She spoke "Die monster! You don't belong in this world!"

Read More