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His world keeps falling apart the more Rarity helps.
rainbow dash cutie mark or rarity i am confused.
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Lero-verse version of, I think, the last or last but one episode of season 3. Twi mucked a spell and switched everyone's cutie marks but hers in the Mane 6. In this version it happened while Dash was trying to rescue Lero from freefall over the forest the town they're going to now is named after. Of course he doesn't know what happened so he's freaking out due to Dash's love and loyalty, and a few other things, being switched into Rarity while Dash ended up with Fluttershy's traits.
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Even if you haven't had the opportunity to watch the Magical Mystery Cure episode for yourself... I do have this bit written into my story:
"When the trio of diamonds faded off Rarity’s body, it was like a puppet’s strings were cut. The fashionista fell face-forward against the side of her own sewing machine, and just remained that way, unmoving, until the mark which had vanished from Rainbow Dash’s flank reappeared on her own. "
... Is it weird that I'm beginning to prefer Rarity over Rainbow Dash?
wow rarity is scary! xD i cant wait for the next chapter! this is gunna get really good :D next chapter
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Decisions, decisions...
Men please tell me that next chapter will come up very soon…this is getting better and better by the minute, and I like that Lero, is not confuse of the fact that Rarity is rescue him, that proof the level of respect he has for her, but he is confuse of how much she is in rage, like he said, the kind of rage you get when you put together between mama bear and her cubs.
And something tell me Rarity got some of Dash libido, that or she loved to be a little flirt with her love one, anyway I'm with the other guy, Dash has good qualities but Rarity just got my attention, can she waggled her flank again next chapter? Oh and please tell me that the damage is not permanent, and he will be able to speak soon.
P.S: I notice you write Rarity undress Lero, but never re dress him, did we have to imply, that Lero is butt naked in that cloud? because, confuse or not, if it is not paralyzed something is going to stand in attention, I hope Rarity will have the courtesy of re dress him
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Men please tell me that next chapter will come up very soon…this is getting better and better by the minute, and I like that Lero, is not confuse of the fact that Rarity is rescue him, that proof the level of respect he has for her, but he is confuse of how much she is in rage, like he said, the kind of rage you get when you put together between mama bear and her cubs.
-- Thank you! It's good of you to notice that distinction!
And something tell me Rarity got some of Dash libido, that or she loved to be a little flirt with her love one,
-- Major Spoiler Alert (though I did kinda hint at this within the story): Rarity now DOES have Dash's libido! Every inch of her sexual appetite! What's more, she loves Lero and both the other two unicorns in his herd just the same way Dash did... because with her mind warped and 'Dashified' the way it is, Rarity now believes those three are HER herd!
anyway I'm with the other guy, Dash has good qualities but Rarity just got my attention, can she waggled her flank again next chapter?
--- Do you want JUST a flank-waggle? Or shall I give you MORE? Though I will say this: Rarity would never do anything to her stallion while he was still in recovery. She'd at least wait until the doctors gave him a clean bill of health.
Oh and please tell me that the damage is not permanent, and he will be able to speak soon.
--- Lero WILL be able to speak, pretty soon. Believe me, I have way too much for him to say! He will talk again, walk again, everything you've seen him do in a Xenophilia fic! ...And then some.
God bless magical unicorn healing spells! And state-of-the-art hospital equipment! They speed things up nicely!
P.S: I notice you write Rarity undress Lero, but never re dress him, did we have to imply, that Lero is butt naked in that cloud? because, confuse or not, if it is not paralyzed something is going to stand in attention, I hope Rarity will have the courtesy of re dress him
-- Heh heh... you know something? I didn't even NOTICE that until you pointed it out!
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Yeah sore, please can we have more, next chapter?
Hey I just figured something, Lero now has a unicorn base herd, je I suppose in Ponyville will thing he has a weakness for the unicorns
I was a little concerned with how you were going to handle this. That concern is lowered with each chapter.
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Was a very near thing, wasn't it?
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Yeah, but I don't see the rape thing, the spider was strait forward about what he wants, and was very in tune with animals, animals don't rape their meals, and even do intelligent that Spider was pretty much acting has his nature way, for all we know…so yeah that rape comment, don't know from where come from, care to elaborate? Because I think I miss it if there was a clue of that.
The die, die, die part remind me of Hazama from BlazBlue... Also on a side note, I hate spiders even more. Creepy 8 legged bastards....
It's been a bit since I wrote fanfiction, but if you're still looking for assistance, I'd be more than happy to help!
Oh my. That was the best way to end a chapter..... Ever!
Sooo.... okay, no offense Dashie but...I gotta prefer Rarity as female lead now, nice to have a more refined change
I'm just now catching up on this story, but isn't magic supposed to roll off Lero in this universe? Not only does she heal him, but she also cloud-walks him. It's not a big deal, just some thing I noticed, and something I occasionally struggle with when writing in someone else's universe. Still, I'm enjoying the story very much.
Much better; thank you
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From what I remember of Xenophilia magic doesn't just roll off of him all the time; sometimes it interacts just with odd consequences or unpredictable limits of time. Kind of like how oil and water doesn't mix but can be affected by other things in the water... Well that example fell apart quickly.
In any case the cloud walking spell was used quite a bit in the original story. It just did not last quite as long as it would have on a regular pony.
Holy shit! Rarity is badass!
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And there was no mention of this in the 'canon' Xenophilia stories
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Woo!
Sesame street fighter is a thing!
(Great chapter too :)
<can't stop laughing> Sesame Street Fighter II! all I could see was this...
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very entertaining, onward to the next chapter!