Life is tough, especially when you live in a corrupt city in a futuristic North American country. After a period of severe wars, all of the major North American cities have branched off and formed their own cities, but life is all but peaceful. Living in the slums of a post-war Chicago, one man must learn what his purpose in life is. But when the unthinkable happens, an old friend teleports him into a far-away land known as Equestria to find his life purpose, and his life will never be quite the same.
I noticed the first person to rate this gave it half a star![:fluttercry:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/fluttercry.png)
I thought it was good, but you should make sure you stay with the same tense. Specifically, these two parts:
"I shake my head."
"My nose cringes"