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This is a poem story I had to write for school and I decided to make it a pony one. She said the goal was to be vivid without having people talk so as to make the writing of descriptions better. This is about ending up in Equestria out of the blue and running into Fluttershy first.

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Comments ( 7 )

Well...:rainbowderp:

I'm going to upvote this, because I think it's a sweet story. There are some errors here and there, but nothing that some tinkering wouldn't fix.

Also, I just can't bring myself to downvote anypony that likes Fluttershy!

*BRO-HOOF*

Apple Short wrote a new story?

IT BEGINS

I feel like there is some sort of deep latent meaning hidden behind this pattern of text. This is surprising to me considering its from apple short. I'm upvoting this because it made me think. Of what, I have no idea. I just know it made me ponder for a good ten minutes before I made this comment. Good job, apple short.

Are you intentionality writing it bad to be funny, or are you serious, I am having a hard time telling.

Replace watching with reading

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