What really happened on the rock farm? She said "And that's how Equestria was made!". What in the world does that mean? Well, this story will tell you everything that went on at the rock farm before Pinkie moved to Ponyville, and what happened to her old family. Rated T for mild gore and graphic (bloody) scenes (for certain people).
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I like this and I'm going to track it and watch you
I just want the text to be a tad longer!
Nice plot.
Agreeing with Negatorian07.
The text does need to be longer. A max for right now is 532 words. That needs to change. 1000-2500 words.
But, overall, it's good.
I do notice some spacing issues unless it's just me, with all the hyphens.
Woooooowwww half a star.
Like the others said, you have grammar taken care of you just need to make it all longer and thats it!
Has Well this is getting good and I do agree that the chapters are a bit short
I like the diary excerpt approach you've opted for, and this is an interesting take on her background. Unlike everybrony else, I like the short chapter format, but I could definitely come to love it if you made longer chapters as well. Tracking!
this is fantastic, but i think it needs more. i like the short chapter format! and the suspense is great. i feel really bad for pinkie though, she doesnt know what is going on!
I'm sorry for the short length of chapters, but it's being worked on in following chapters. I'm glad you like it, and hope you continue reading
I'm absolutely loving this!
Kepp it up.
I love it! Cute title, and I actually like the short chapters. It's very interesting, and full of suspense. Keep up the great work!
156331 I'm trying, good sir! I'm working on making the chapters more lengthy with time, so please, be a little patient. The hyphens were to mark a jump in time during that day. I realized that with the way I had them, they went on to the next line. I am writing this in Microsoft Word, and copying it over, so small issues may occur. I'll try to fix them as I notice them.
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167922 Pardon?
More pinkie pie!
she's my absolute favorite I'd love to read an actually well put together romance about her sometime! :)
I love these stories, bro! Keep it up!
I love this story! It is boss!
Amazing! I loved every word!
174898 Pssssstttt... I just might be working on one right now. SHHHHH DON'T TELL.
Akkkk! So excited!
239478 It's going through the whole process of being uploaded
I sure hope you like it. Go check my stories tomorrow, or search for "Absolutely Dash-ing" the next time you get a chance. I hope it gets up there soon. I just threw it in for the whole "Submit" shindig, so it's probably got a while before it actually shows up on the site. If you wanna know what it's about beforehand, here you go. Copy and pasted straight from my story description: 
You're welcome!
Daring Do has risen from the pages of Twilight's book series due to another of Spike's failures to impress Twilight. The rules were, she could stay there as long as she wanted and be put back whenever she wanted to be put back, as long as she never fell in love, otherwise her placement in Ponyville would be permanent. Later, she falls in love with Rainbow Dash upon first sight. Dash is suddenly struck with the love bugs as well, but she already had a very special somepony; Pinkie Pie. Rainbow Dash is suddenly conflicted with the decision of staying with Pinkie Pie, or taking the risk, and leaping for Daring Do.
Love,
Glowstar77
P.S.
Ahh glow star! You know just what to write. I'm loving your other one but considering pinkie is my favorite this hits straight home! Thank you for this story! It's awesome.
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hooray for pinkie! ^^
This is awesome. Thumbs up for you! but poor pinkie pie....
I agree with lightning flare
Woah, hold on....how does she go from dark and depressing to very happy? And Rainboom does a sonic rainboom out of nowhere? I'm suprised she did not kill herself being that she's the only one still alive.......hmmmm....
Awesome! You rock!
I love depressing stories like this. It's probably one of my favorite stories on the site.
Mr and Mrs cake seem to show a surprising lack of compassion for pinkie regarding her parents and family just died and its hardly tied in with canon as later in the series the cakes have not one but two babies... other then that good job.
I read it all the way through till the end (Well, latest chapter XD )! You have very detailed writing, good job hope you continue on your stories.