Ponies dissapear in the of dead night. Luna haven't been seen in months. Nopony notices this though, because that's what the rebels do. They make sure to keep the war between the day and night in the dark, for the sake of all ponykind. But what has really happened to cause this? How do they intend on ending the war? And most importantly, what does it have to do with Twilight Sparkle?
Artwork by MScootaloo I can't thank her enough for drawing that picture for me :3 Also thanks to NotTheOP for staying my faithful editor. Would not be able to do anything without him :3 Also thanks to Markey58 for prereading for me
If you want to pick up Intrigue and write your own story based on it feel free to do so, just pm me okay?
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If this is just another Celestia is evil and Twilight has to beat her kind of thing, I'm going to be very disappointed.
However, it's written very well, good grammar, and no spelling mistakes that I saw. And let me just say, you couldn't have picked a better cover art, it's just beautiful.
1910966 You'll just have to see :) Also I had the cover art made for me by my good friend Scoots :)
1910972 Well, I hope you thanked her, because it's one of the best pieces FIM art I have ever seen.
1911017 She's happy to hear you think so :)
I love this story very well done you made me worry a little with Vinyl but other then that i hope to see more good Chapters
Twilight not having any doubts at all letting total strangers in her home during the night? Were their names Gary and Mary? Using book as a shield? And it worked? Celestia is presumably trying to kill her own student? Octy hitting Twi in the end?
This needs "random" tag, because so far the story makes so little sense
1912293 Thanks :)
1913185 Answers will come later :)