In an alternate universe where everyone is human, what happens when some bizarre magic transforms someone into a cute cuddle-worthy critter?
Inspired by a comment on derpibooru.
I've been reading stories here since December 2011, but I only now decided to register. I just couldn't keep track of all the great stories here anymore.
In an alternate universe where everyone is human, what happens when some bizarre magic transforms someone into a cute cuddle-worthy critter?
Inspired by a comment on derpibooru.
There are a few missing words here and there, but I love the idea. Keep it up!
1848293 Could you please point them out, so I can correct them?
1848294
In all honesty, not really. Kinda late where I am. I might come back later. I do recommend finding a prereader for this kind of thing though.
MOAR!!!![:flutterrage:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/flutterrage.png)
Merry Christmas
1848365 Thanks, merry Christmas to you too. I'm working on the second chapter at the moment, but it'll take some time, as I'm a pretty slow writer.
Dat be fine![:eeyup:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/eeyup.png)
Take yo time![:moustache:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/moustache.png)
Not bad! Rumble is really sweet. :) I have one suggestion: Try putting Rumble's internal thoughts in italics, it makes it easier to distinguish them from the narrative.
MOAR!!!!!!!!!
Aww... That was surprisingly cute. Any chance that this could be a roving change? In other words each morning, someone who had contact with the pony the previous day becomes a pony and the last person changes back? It would introduce a fun dynamic of 'what do we do with this?', especially after his sister spends the day that way.![:pinkiesmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiesmile.png)
4955710 Thanks... Glad you liked it. I'm surprised someone even still found this story. Still haven't given up on it, but it's been a really long time since I worked on it. Hopefully I can continue at some point.
4959152![:fluttercry:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/fluttercry.png)
pls
j-just update already
1848371![:flutterrage:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/flutterrage.png)
7 years and no update!!