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Heartwarming.A couple minor spelling errors,but they're easily ignored.
>comments and stars
Now I have a sudden urge to refer to ratings as 'stars.'
Quite an adorable story of lifetime friends ^-^
And there were copious amounts of dawww...
Nice fic.
A nice short. They're speech sounded closer to adolescence than kids, not sure which you were going for. I kind of like the thought of them at adolescents because it makes the kiss seem a bit sweeter.
d'aaaaw....![:yay:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/yay.png)
Aww, that was so cute
Do you plan a sequel?
Daww. That was cute. I liked their banter, and the kiss on the cheek made me smile.![:heart:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/heart.png)
very sweet ^^
Nice.
There should be more stories like this.
d'awwwww.....![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
Loved that line. Loved every bit of it. Keep scratching the pencil, or pressing the keys or whatever you good writers do these days.![:pinkiesmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiesmile.png)