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Oh boy, Equestria is in big trouble.

“Of course we bloody understood everything!” the Royal Armed Forces Council Attache, Colonel Dark Arms, shouted as he looked at the file. “Some technological advanced glorified apes who speak Griffonian and have Griffonian attire, have suddenly appeared out of nowhere! I ought to have hal-”

Dark Arms immediately brightened up. "See, Princess? We can just wipe them out in one g-"

The warmongering earthpony was silenced by the alicorn's stare once more.

A slight silence before the entire room roared with fury. Giving up lands to aliens? Improbable!

The colonel opened his mouth, perhaps to complain, and to perhaps try to convince the Princess to take advantage of the situation by simply mopping these humans up, but the alicorn was quicker.

If you ask me, this Colonel Dark Arms is just as BAD as the Nazis themselves, ironically.

Look, I'm not defending Hitler and the other Nazis in any scenario. But, NOT every German like most citizens and some low to mid-ranking soldiers is like them.


Plus, the fact that they have just got to Equestria already, without violence ( So far. ).

And some diabolical ponies like this Dark Arms stallion just want to attack a clearly almost destroyed City of Berlin for no good reason and no probable cause, besides hypocritical racism/xenophobic views. ( Despite Ponykind supposed to be "friendship and harmony". )

keep it comin

Adolf: This isn't South America (probably)

Karl Dointz, Albert Speer Hermann Goering, and Martin Bormann are moderates while Henrich Himmler, and Joseph Goebbels are radicals. John Smith however could go either way later on, cause I’m leading toward the moderate side.

Wonder if for Obvious reasons There will be a Alliance with the Changelings or something else will happen.

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i don’t think an american would be widely respected as a leader and since i want this to be as historically authentic as humanly possible, i am sorry but i do not think im putting John Smith as an option for leadership

great chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

I hope that the question from the previous chapter is relevant. In my personal opinion, it is worth paying more attention to Karl Dönitz and Albert Speer. Because it seems to me that out of all this six they pay the least attention, although the characters from them could turn out to be very interesting and important. For Albert Spey, I unfortunately don’t have very many hopes regarding his future role in the story, except that he could finally carry out a total perestroika and reconstruction of Berlin, and also that he could start doing something similar with others large cities of Equus which, like Berlin, could in the future emphasize the greatness and beauty of the Greater German Reich. But for Karl Dönitz, I have more hopes for his future role in the plot. So, for example, in one of the next chapters it would be possible to make him the new Fuhrer of the Reich after the death of Hitler and the future struggle for power in the ranks of the NSDAP, and after that he could become for the inhabitants of this world, albeit a small one, but a light in the darkness that would soften politics Reich to the local population, as was in fashion. In addition, shortly before the defeat of Germany, Dönitz was appointed by Hitler as his successor as Reich President, so I find this version of the scenario for Dönitz’s future to be very historically reliable. For the future of the fanfic, I will most likely have not very strong hopes for the role of Albert Spee in the plot and high hopes for the role of Karl Dönitz, although perhaps he will have the same not very large role as Albert Spee. I apologize in advance if there are any grammatical errors here, since I translated the text through a translator.

Very interesting series I will look forward to the next chapter

The two Princesses were quite optimistic. These people certainly had virtue and discipline, as they saw it.

It would be their greatest mistake.

Yep, you all have no freaking idea how bad it will be. :twilightoops: :pinkiecrazy:

Who thought it was a good idea to give the Fuhrer a history book of this world?

However, They would have to, for a lack of better words, endure the incoming onslaught that would be Hitler’s incoming rampage.

The only sound was the ticking of the clock, as the room awaited in heavy silence. It was becoming *unbearable*, all of them wondering when the Fuhrer’s wrath would finally come crashing down on them.

“WHAT IS THIS?!” a roar finally snaps them out of their thoughts, as they all see Hitler up, his palms against the table. The man is furious. Utterly furious.

“COMMUNISTS? IN THIS WORLD?! A RAGTAG HIVE OF BUGS SPEAKING OUR BEAUTIFUL LANGUAGE?! “ he shouts. “THIS WORLD IS FILLED WITH ABOMINATIONS OF CREATION! “ he slams his fit, shaking several items, and a lamp falls down, shattering on the floor. But Hitler doesn’t care. This degenerate filth is polluting his glorious Valhalla.

“THIS PRINCESS IS UTTERLY PATHETIC! SHE HAD ALL THE NECESSARY TOOLS AND CAPABILITIES TO CRUSH THIS REVOLT OF RAGTAG COMMUNISTS WITH EASE. SHE HERSELF HAS ALL THE SUPPOSED STRENGTH AND ‘MAGIC’ TO CRUSH THIS ANIMALISTIC BOLSHEVIK IDEOLOGY! AND YET SHE DOESN’T! THIS DOESN’T SOUND LIKE A STRONG, BENEVOLENT RULER! THIS SOUNDS LIKE A WEAK RULER WHO DOES NOT UNDERSTAND THE CONCEPT OF POWER!”

Hitler began to move around the room, his words shouting venom as he could not believe what awaited in his beloved wonderland for the Aryans.

“SHE DOES NOT UNDERSTAND HER SO-CALLED PEACE DOES NOT HAVE THE CAPACITY TO FUNCTION. HER ARMY IS NON-EXISTANT! SHE DOES NOT HAVE THE CAPIBILITIES TO DEFEND HER IDEALS. ONLY RELYING ON 6 PONIES TO DEFEND ALL OF THIS SHAM OF A NATION! IT IS UTTER INSANITY!”

The man coughed several times, as he grabbed another lamp and threw it at a wall as he roared with fury. The lamp shattered against the wall, the shards falling onto the floor.

“MY BELOVED VALHALLA IS FILLED...” he coughed again, groaning. “..WITH FILTH! NO MATTER WHERE I AM, THERE IS FILTH AND ABOMINATIOns...”

Adolf Hitler was breathing heavily, his voice rasp. Himself shaking with anger. He leaned against the desk, putting his hand on the edge for support.

“Gentlemen..” his rasp voice calls to the inner circle members. “..we have ben given, by the wills of fate, a great responsibility for the betterment of mankind. These creatures are not animals in the slightest. They are an abomination, creatures that have been out of their cages for too long. It is time for our species, our race, to step in once more and bring semblence of order to these things, these animals that have the unnatural ability to speak. They have been out of control and it is our duty to put these animals in their place. This is our collective struggle, our struggle for the restoration of mankind as the dominant species of this world. It is now my responsibility to not only make Germany glorious again, but to show these creatures their place once more. After all, a man is not ruled by a horse. He rides the horse. Germany will not be run by animals, but by humans. “

He inhaled, having somewhat calmed down, however he was still furious. However, as he had done in 1933, he would follow whatever the circumstances dictated. In the end, he would be victorious.

“We have been given a second chance, a new lease upon life. We have been given the mandate from fate to cleanse our Valhalla. It is our duty to seize this oppurtunity with both hands. We shall rebuild, rearm and Germania shall be reborn anew. “

With this, he grabbed the history book and threw it in the trash can.

He then walked towards his office table, sat down on the seat, grabbed his glasses and placed them on before grabbing a governmental report.

Hitler then looked up at the men still in the room. There was a heavy silence for about 5 seconds before he opened his mouth and out came one word: “Dismissed.”

That one word immediately made the men, out of *instinct* or, in Goebbels’s case, fanatical belief, raised their arms in a salute, before all of them were heading for the door.

The Reich’s gear are spinning..

the Fuhrer’s orders are clear...

..there is much work to be done.

Yep, Planet Equis/Equestria are most definitely screwed! :twilightoops: :pinkiecrazy:


And it seems like that Chrysalis/Changelings aren't going to be "allies" with Hitler, because he thinks they are total rip-offs of his Nazi Germany, which they kind of are.

Despite other commenters thinking otherwise?

Firstly, I want to wish you good luck in completing your schoolwork and exams, and secondly, despite its average size, the chapter turned out to be informative, as well as high-quality and interesting. I'll be looking forward to future chapters with interest.

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Thank you very much, kind sir!

Operation Broken Horn is about to begin.

The new chapter again turned out to be good in quality and interest. From myself I can say that the struggle between the highest ranks for power and influence turned out to be really interesting, I think it will be touched upon more than once in the following chapters. The only thing I can find fault with is some aspects of the manner of speech of the highest ranks of the Reich, since I doubt that they will express themselves so freely at such an important meeting. Another interesting thing is that changelings were not mentioned at all here, which suggests that the Reich did not have a very good relationship with them, and if we take this into account, they could seriously ruin the life of the Reich and its government, given their ability to disguise themselves. And for the future to the author. Please do not forget about the technological advantage of the Reich over the states of this world. Because thanks to them, the Reich has a significant advantage, and given the fact that the Reich is not particularly in danger now, it can complete and even improve current and future projects and technologies thanks to magic in this world. That's all, good luck in life and in writing future chapters.

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