A small lapse of judgment on Rarity's part sets in motion a series of events leading to realization, admission and development of the feelings of three mares for Spike. How will this affect their friendship? Who will win his love? Read and find
With his dark past heavy on his mind, Sombra is put to the test as he begins a reformation process. Though his mind is no longer crowded with the influence of dark magic, his heart is none the lighter. Let the test begin.
Taking place one month after the events of the movie, Pinkie Pie and Twilight's relationship has been especially strained after everything that happened.
A nice Twipie story, albeit with grammar mistake. May I recommend reading 'Writing guide by Ezn' to help improve your writing skill?
It was about 2:34 at Night, lunas moon
or maybe Twilight mind is more tired than I thought?
Twilight whispered to herself.
She goes to open the door to find a pink mare with drowsy tired eyes,looking concerned
But before Twilight can protest and tell Pinkie she was making things up, Pinkie shakes her head with a small smile and with a yawn
Before that though there was "her voice sounding Blane and annoyed", which i am unsure what to replace it with, plain?
Twilight says as gentle as she can, pinkies face instantly brightens up
“Yeah.. I think so to.."
You might have accidentally put a quotation mark in the next paragraph, where the missing quotation mark is,
all her worries and sadness all gone, like they were never there. The feeling of warmth filled Twilight as a small smile fell on her snout, as slumber came over her making her fall into dream land.
A nice Twipie story, albeit with grammar mistake. May I recommend reading 'Writing guide by Ezn' to help improve your writing skill?
or maybe Twilight mind is more tired than I thought?
Before that though there was "her voice sounding Blane and annoyed", which i am unsure what to replace it with, plain?
You might have accidentally put a quotation mark in the next paragraph, where the missing quotation mark is,
With respect, from a fellow Twipie.
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Thank you! I'm trying my best to write Correctly!