When she was in middle school, Sunset Shimmer suffered from what is called 'Middle-second syndrome'.
It is a term used to describe young teens who have grandiose delusions, and in some cases, have convinces themselves that they have secret powers.
She used to call herself 'The God Princess of Flames', an immortal being capable of manipulate fire, alienating herself from her classmates.
Finding her past embarrassing, Sunset will try everything to start her high school journey quietly after moving out from her city.
But not everything went as planned when she meets Twilight Sparkle, a girl in her class suffering from the very same syndrome, who calls herself 'The God Princess of Night'.
Sunset will do everything in her power to avoid being around that girl, but she will find it to be a difficult task since this girl literally lives next door.
Art Cover by @IoNaomichi on Twitter.
Chunibyo re-written as Equestria Girls with my own changes and implementations.
This is not a serious story, just writing stuff for the fun of it, don't take it too seriously.
Day one, already featured ahah, thanks guys
Good cover! haaaaaa ..drawing really is such a difficult thing!
Wait, parallel universe? ... interesting
Oh god they're chuuni
Interesting so far. One pet peeve, though, is that the way you mix your dialogue with action text is a bit wonky. For example:
This would be all one sentence, so the word "she" shouldn't be capitalized. Or:
Personally, I'd say the first sentence ends at "loud", so uncapitalize "she" again and end it with a period. "She sighed" is a sentence on its own, so another period there.
"First day…” she thought out loud. “I wonder how my classmates are going to be.” She sighed. “Well, it can’t be worse than my first day in sixth grade.”
Anyway, just my two cents. You're doing well! Keep going!
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Hey thanks!
Sorry for the mistakes! I'll be careful from now on.
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Yes, that is literally the original Japanese for the syndrome mentioned in the description. (There's a reason the official localizations don't bother to translate it)
this looks promising
Really enjoying this
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thanks!
I'm sorry, is this going to just be a complete rewrite of Love, Chunibyo, & Other Delusions, but with Equestria Girls characters? It's starting to feel that way as you have already hit a lot of the same story beats as the manga/anime.
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Nope!
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Well, now that I think of it, kinda?
I don't know, I haven't watched it in a while though.
I guess it'll be a mix of a re-write with EQG and some of my own implementations?
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I'm really hoping it's not too similar. I don't particularly want to read a rewrite of an anime, but with EQG flavors. Here's hoping that we get to see some original writing.
Good start so far.
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thanks!
Doki Doki Literature Club reference?
Also getting some Sailor Moon vibes here with Luna the cat...
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Yes!
DDLC? thats not good to mention it in such a sweet school life story
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Aww, man. I'm really enjoying this story
Thanks for writing it!
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thank you so much!
Started to read this.
I heard of the anime and bit of cringe humor, not my forte, but could watch, except for the pure rage I feel seeing the main oc hit the cringe girl so many times in the head.
While I get it humor, rubbed me the wrong way.
There better ways to snap her out of it, besides abusing her.
So hoping Sunset doesn't go down that route,
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funny you said that because it's something that bothered me as well in the anime,
i try to write as little violence as possible
it is supposed to be a feel good funny story after all
palworld...time killer indeed(and splendid chapter!)
You're gonna regret that later Sunset.
going to that school too.*
Well, that was unexpected...
Ok?
Talk about a bad start.
It's obvious what's coming.
I was thinking something different but I think I got the motto.
Guess that explains why he wasn't mentioned earlier.
Oh boy here we go.
dinner.*
Did she do that on purpose or just to make Twilight happy?
her.*
You never know what'll happen.
Oof.
lose Twilight*
It's written all over your face.
Awkward.
It's Pinkie Pie. She's always like that.
Never change Pinkie.
battle. The three*
Close enough
the lunch bell rang,*
girls do!"*
Of course.
it is. I saw one,*
we need to-*
This is why you don't have friends Twilight.
Sure did.
Just what we needed!
Woah!
It was the opposite of a nightmare...
How embarrassing.
It is!
could hear a mutter from her left.*
as I would love him to face detention*
Wait what!?
I can't believe you wanted this Flash.
didn't say a word*
He had it coming.
Lol.
he's never gonna have a bad hair day."*
Nope.
You did in another reality.
took place in her chair.*
If she had actual powers.
And here I thought only Hunter from Owl House did that.
someone has to watch these monsters*
Also, they're not monsters!
in several bowls.*
usually has soccer practice after school,*
At least Rarity does which is good.
friends with Rarity?"*
Pinkie's friends with everyone.*
Same.
Glad to be caught up with this story. Aside from Twilight's behavior and a few mistakes, I've been enjoying this story. I've read only a few eqg stories where Sunset has always been human and there's no magic business whatsoever.