The jittery excitement persisted the whole time Twilight tried to set up her record player, her hooves shaking so badly she almost dropped the disc. Trying to be quiet was harder, the urge to jump around like a filly and scream to the heavens that she had found something from beyond their world only halted by the prospect of waking up half of the town and causing a panic.
The record's golden coated surface glinted in the low light like an unearthed gem, subjected to scan after scan before she even tried playing it. She confirmed some things she already thought — it had absolutely no magic in it's composition, so it wasn't ponymade. It was old, incomprehensibly so, perhaps a couple hundred thousand years or more. It held information more than just sound, though in ways that made Twilight's head spin. It felt almost magical, but held no real mana, reminding Twilight most similarly of a projection circle for broadcasting images or memories.
She clapped her hooves together, shuffling through her pages of notes to gather her thoughts. Playing the record seemed to be the most common sense course of action, whatever other secrets it held could wait for her to gather more information, especially since she didn't yet understand the not-magical matrix it seemed to contain on the other side.
Taking a deep, if shaky, breath, Twilight set the record onto the player, casting a quick troubleshooting spell to try and gather the speed at which it should be played. She didn't understand enough of the symbols to know the intended rotation speed, so a magical guess would need to be enough.
There was a few seconds of silence after the needle touched down, and, then, there! Noise, like speech, though nothing Twilight could even remotely understand.
The creatures of Equis spoke in dozens of different languages, so translation spells did exist. They didn't work the way manual translation did, where words may be exchanged from language to language using a dictionary and come out precise. Instead, most relied off of intention and approximations, translating meaning but not always literal word-for-word rehashes, better than nothing when an interpretator wasn't avaliable. It wasn't as exact or precise of having a creature translate, but it was all she had, and she could tell just from the sound that these noises weren't made by any being off of Equis. She wasn't even sure she could imitate some of them, the tone and inflection unlike any she had ever heard.
Twilight removed the needle and reset it, readying her quill for note taking the same time as she cast the spell.
The contents went on for over an hour, but Twilight had stopped taking notes only a few minutes in, utterly awestruck.
They called themselves humans (a fact she only found out once she recast the spell, after it continued to simply call their species "sapiants"). They were from a planet called Earth, and lived in a solar system with several other planets. These planets orbited a star, their sun, a stark contrast to Equis' system, where the sun and moon moved around their world. They had included greetings in countless languages — offers of friendship, wishes for peace, invitations to come visit their world and to send a message back. Sounds of the animals and phenomenon of their planet, only half of which Twilight could identify for-sure origins of. Music, music from another world in other languages, all different styles and tempos and feelings.
She ended up with a dozens of pages of notes, information, speculation, and jubilation. There were other species beyond Equis, and they wanted to be friends! So many, billions of them, on another world!
And that was before she flipped the record, following the not-magic's mapping to create something akin to a projection spell.
Images. The circle from the cover, which she only made connections to after observing it. Diagrams. Pictures of alien landscapes and mathematical concepts that Twilight digilantly transcribed. Pictures of these humans and their world. A map of the movement of their continents. Creatures with Equestrian analogs, and creatures she had never seen before. Machines beyond understanding. Homes. Families. Lives of a species across the galaxy, creatures who lived a million years ago.
Twilight wasn't sure just one pony could document this. This changed everything. Everything was going to change. This wasn't just some vague message, there was a craft and the record. The record! It wasn't just a record, but a priceless artifact. Even with all the information could be gleamed from this, there was still so much she didn't know.
The cover...
Twilight held it back up.
There was some she could identify without research. The calibration circle in the first "image" was there, as well as the First Element. There was something that reminded her of a map of some major stars, but didn't align with any stars around—
Twilight's eyes widened, and she leaned closer. It didn't align with Equissian stars, but humans weren't from Equis! If somepony was to try and find the stars here, they might be able to find the planet Earth.
Some stars pulsed with energy, though this was near impossible to track by normal ponies. Luna, however, would almost certainly keep some sort of log of them, or know how to find these!
Twilight stayed up to the early hours, Celestia's sun creeping well over the horizon before she finally stepped back to relax. Over an hour of content had been summarized and put into different sections of interest as well as she was able, with sections of special interest given extra attention (such as the two greetings from what she thought were leaders of some sort, one written, one spoken).
Spike stumbled down the stairs at half past six in the morning, blearily looking into the library's main floor to find a scene that was odd even for them. Twilight, playing what sounded like gibberish off of a record that shone like the stars, the room scattered with notes as she hovered perhaps a dozen books in the air around her, all while jumping around excitedly. She hadn't even noticed his awakening yet, and Spike sighed. It was going to be a long day.
I like this and how much Twilight would totally jump in hooves first. Scientist first, Princess second, lol.
For your second story here, you are doing just fine. The writing is a tad bit choppy in places, but that's something that ALL writers struggle with. So yeah, I really want to see what her "predictions" are and see what the Princesses have to say.
If you like Space have you ever read Changeling Space Program?
Such a wonderfully interesting concept, excited to see where this goes!
From the way it’s written an inordinate amount of time has passed since the Voyager probe was launched. The real question is whether there would be anyone left to make contact with, I suppose that would depend on how optimistic one is for our species continual existence.
This can go 2 ways now, Twilight find us in the stars or find our tombs and learns how fuck up we are
The return message:
"Send more Chuck Berry."
I'm hoping she remembered to cordon the site off and inform the landowner, so it doesn't end up in the junkyard...
Twilight then learns that luna moving stars is impossible or that luna is billions of times stronger than Celestia.
I love the concept of ancient humans from the stars. I wonder what Twilight will discover of us, considering the sheer amount of time that has passed. If "humans" are still around, they probably resemble nothing like what we know now, considering it's been millions of years. If not... I just hope we went out with a suitably epic bang
This chapter is even better that the last one.
The pictures in the golden record are encoded similar to how analog TV works, but slower and instead of horizontal lines, they used vertical lines for some reason.
Man this nails all of Twilights interests all at once. I would love to see how she goes full Twilight to someone about what she has discovered.
As a (recovering) space nerd, you have no idea how happy this story makes me. Also, welcome to FiMfiction my friend!
I’m really enjoying this so far! You got Twilight’s fascination with learning and insatiable curiosity down in her narration. Her excitement here is downright infectious. I can’t wait to see what comes of her discovery!
This reminds me of that older story where Luna is found on the moon during the Apollo missions. That was also a really good take on humanity and Equestrians discovering each other.
Hundreds of thousands of years.
Yeah... so humanity is either "beyond" or BEYOND, if you get my drift.
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Which one? There were two that I recall, and both seemed to have been dropped. I should perhaps look in the Luna group to find either, but I'm too lazy.
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Is that a "Star-child" reference from the 2001 series, or the ascension of Humanity from the book "Childhood's End"? Clarke was always fiddling with that concept in both tales...
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It’s called “The Eagle has Landed.”
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Would you believe me if I said I wasn't meaning to reference anything and I did it entirely on accident? It just.. happened to come out like that.
Nonetheless, coming back to the story, if she searches hard enough, Twilight will either find a race so advanced it's comical or... a very large and sad tomb.
No middle ground on that one.
You should write more. 👍
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Aye, plus the sequels to that story. Also, another is "Luna's Return Trajectory", which is set in the later Apollo missions and where Luna was to be brought back to Earth. Apparently, that story was dropped before that part could be written,
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I don't know how much is "just" fanon, since it's honestly been awhile since I watched MLP (and I only watched sporadically S5 onwards), but I always got the impression that ponies were prone to panic — especially certain ones in Ponyville (like the flower trio?).
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Luna's Return Trajectory is still being written. It added more chapters late last year, and it's author recently made a blog post about making more. It's not "dropped", AFAIK.
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Course, trouble there is when you have actual magic, with its own rules, uses, and limitations.
This is quite good for your second story, and Voyager stuff is always a treat, so keep it up!
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Good news! Lunas return trajectory has been updated recently. It’s not dead!
Ah nice !
Thank you for writing !
This is certainly going to be interesting. I wonder how Twilight's friends are going to react.
Really liking the story so far. Can't wait to see where you take it!
Possibly the best "Voyager probe" fic on this site !
Please continue
If I recall correctly, the other two I read were one-shots. Whereas you seem to be developing this story.
Ah, very nice.
Time to hunt for some neutron stars!
The whole thing is surprisinly interesting. I would love to see a continuation of the story :)