It's a gorgeous summer day in Ponyville, and both Tempest Shadow and Twilight Sparkle both have a bit of a situation on their hooves—they both want to take advantage of the nice weather and go on a relaxing date to get away from the chaos of the world.
But Twilight and Tempest both have very different ideas as to what they want out of dates. And, to make it more complicated, neither of them have ever been on a date before. So, seeking advice from their friends, the two wrestle with their feelings for each other and push to make this first date go well. At the end of the day, though, they are both still too afraid to ask.
My first story on FIMFiction; the first of many, I hope!
Check it out, you got approved already! You already know my thoughts on your story, Redwing, but it looks like you touched it up a little before officially publishing it. Good job.
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Thank you! I did go back and fix up a little bit of grammar/spacing errors. Thank you so much for being my editor on this one, man!
Huzzah! Congrats!
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Thank you!
Good work!
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Thank you! I tried to make this story as good as I possibly could make it, and fingers crossed, it's paid off. :)
hehe
sex
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hehehe
pingas
Aww! Awkward purple horses have a date!
Good advice from AJ and Rarity, too.
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Yesssssss, if you keep reading; you'll get to see how great the date goes. Thanks for your comment!
And yeah, I did try to have Rarity and AJ give good advice. :)
Tempest is so freaking adorable, this too much for my heart to handle!!
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Thank you! I really tried to make her really cute :3
Really enjoyed this one, and now I kinda want more
Great work mate
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Thank you! More is in production!
based
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based indeed! Praise the Moon!
Lovely first chapter Red.
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Thank you! Feel free to read the rest! I think you'll love it :)
..Anger.. PURE ANGER!! THAT PONY NEEDS TO BE SENT TO THE MOON NOW!!!!!
Lovely chapter by the way
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Oh absolutely, Twiggy should have sent Fusspot to the moon. Ah well, can't send every Karen to the moon.
Glad to hear you loved it!
Amazing work pal!
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Thank you so much! I'm so happy you loved it!
>Femme Fatales
Shouldn't it be femmes fatale, like courts martial?
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Not sure; I usually see "femme fatales" as the plural of "femme fatale". Or at least, I think I have.
Wow. Damn. Usually I say TwiDash is OTP and that's true but I'm willing to admit Tempest is a close second best match for Twi
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Wonderful, my friend! I hope to continue to preach the wonders of TwiPest. Fizzy just needs so much love and care, and Twilight is there for her in every story they are featured in. :)
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What about a triad? TwiDashFizzy?
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I can definitely see that happening, but sadly, not in this continuity.
That said, I do think Fizzy and Dash would be decent friends.
Greetings. Your requested reading has been completed and can be found below. I hope you enjoy.
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Thank you so much, man!
Adorable!
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Thank you! 😁
TempestLight is best light.
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Indeed