A mythical hero, thought dead for hundreds of years, is found alive in the ice. Hitch, dedicated to the law, is sent to the mountains to investigate how this came to be. And perhaps make a friend along the way.
Written as a small exploratory for the 2023 M/M Shipping Contest.
Quick heads-up, there are several times you've misspelled Capper's name as "Caper" (one P instead of two); you might want to do a quick Crtl+F word search to weed them out.
All in all, not too shabby! There were a few discrepancies regarding Hitch's portrayal that didn't quite add up until the Author's Note disclaimer — you might want to consider adding an AU tag for good measure — but once I got past those, I enjoyed this on the whole all the same.
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Good spot; fixed and AU added.
And that's that the result I was looking for: simply an enjoyable read. Thanka for the kind words.
ooh, perfect way to get a mortal G4 character into the world of G5!
hehe, very cool, like a line out of a movie
that is a very cool name, well-chosen
yay Twilight Sparkle-based dating systems!
hehe nice to settle this while also making sense as something the characters would say
so true
to be fair it is a very nice dungeon
do like the idea of it just being a thing that all the princesses have such a favorite food, which is also taken up by rulers of the present day in G5
oof, just like that, Capper is left to try to figure out a new life? “new, terrifying Equestria” indeed
glad that Capper is at least standing firm in this
i must admit, i really don’t see much in the way of “shipping” here. lots of potential with the scenario and characters, but that potential remains only potential with what little there is of the story. thank you for writing, though!