Flurry Heart offers Cozy Glow the chance to learn the true meaning of Devotion.
Written entirely in iambic tetrameter, with the first line of each verse headless.
An entry in Imposing Sovereigns IV, using the prompt Flurry/Cozy<->Loyalty.
Some of them want to use you, some of them want to be used by you/Some of them want to abuse you, some of them want to be abused.
Flurry Heart offers Cozy Glow the chance to learn the true meaning of Devotion.
Written entirely in iambic tetrameter, with the first line of each verse headless.
An entry in Imposing Sovereigns IV, using the prompt Flurry/Cozy<->Loyalty.
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I really enjoyed it myself.
Lovely stuff... though some of those rhymes are massive stretches, and you do have a few AAAA stanzas. Still, writing an entire short story as an epic poem is no mean feat, and you pulled off this one quite effectively. Thank you for one heck of a read, and best of luck in the judging.
I am not as good at reading poetry as I should be, and I struggled to follow along with what was happening at times. But the sheer effort that must have gone into making this leaves me pretty astonished. It is a remarkable feat, and I wish you luck in the contest
Good job on this poem, and all the effort that went into it. I often have a hard time reading long stretches of poetry, but I was able to get through this well.
finally made it! i'll admit i'm not entirely sure on everything that happened, but it was still an enjoyable read regardless ^^ it was fun to sound out all the rhymes, there's a lot of good rhythm in poetry and im incredibly impressed you managed to keep it up in such quality for such a large amount. best of luck in the contest!
What do you mean by that?