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Nice. Very nice. A rather interesting dilemma for the Element of Generosity. I can't wait to see where this story could potentially go. Hopefully Rarity won't become poach Rumble from Sweetie Bell. That would be VERY inconsiderate of her.

She'd never been this close to one before

So... they weren't fucking, before?

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Probably never tried oral before which shouldn't be a surprise. Oral sex can be awkward at first than the actual sex.

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But she said she's never been that close. It doesn't get any closer than inside.

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So, I'm expected to believe these two have been fucking for who knows how long and she's never actually gotten a good look at his dick? No. That's ridiculous.

Hi!!!!
Sorry for any confusion to any of my readers. Sweetie Belle and Rumble are a new couple and have just began to "dry hump" that day in Rarity's kitchen.
So technically, Sweetie Belle hasn't really seen it up close.

I hope you keep reading and enjoy the third installment of my little story
:raritywink:

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So those bed squeaking sounds wasn't them having sex?

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It's just a little double entendre, playing on the fact of how inexperienced Rarity is.
Sweetie Belle and Rumble are just heavy petting and getting their project done
:raritywink:

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when's the next chapter?

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Soon, very soon
I've just been busy with work but I will get it out soon

I have to admit that that part with Applejack and Big Mac honestly caught my by surprise!! I love it!

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I'm pleased you're enjoying it
There's plenty more to come! :raritywink:

Why did I get a update notification?

Good start, hopefully it won’t turn into just clop since the idea is interesting as well.

Good so far, honestly kinda hoping it makes her forget and twilight becomes her ‘mom’ due to the potion.

i'm sure there was an update but I don't see it :twilightoops:

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I accidentally published a very incomplete chapter 6 :facehoof:

Sorry :twilightsheepish:

How dark is this story going to be?

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Hiiii
It's not really a dark story, it's just what it says on the tin really
I hope you continue to enjoy it :twilightsmile:

Hang on how is rarity" reliving her childhood" as black diamond if black diamond and her " gentleman callers" are all adults? I'm liking the story but that aspect confuses me wouldn't it be better if they were all actually children?

Hiiii darling! I'm sorry if you're feeling confused. You even had me thinking and re-reading a few chapters!
Allow me to explain:-

*It's not foalcon or it would be stated.

*Rarity wasn't sure how young the potion was going to make her.

*Rarity has become a young coming of age pony she's not a child and not yet an adult, thus giving her a second chance to learn the things she missed out on all those years ago.

*When Black Diamond speaks of the mature ponies she's slept with, she is using her own memories of the ponies she's slept with as a mare before she changed.

I've put a lot of thought and late nights into this story for my lovely readers. In which I hope you all continue to enjoy!
:raritywink:

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ohh OK thank you for explaining

It’s says it’s been updated?

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Hiii
I accidentally hit the publish button instead of the edit :derpyderp1:

I've just published chapter 11 for all to enjoy :twilightsmile:

Pinkie Pie breaking the 4th wall had me giddy as a filly! :pinkiecrazy:

just then Pinkie Pie popped up behind her. "Hi Rarity!" Then as quickly as she'd arrived she was gone, humming and skipping through the park.

Keep up the good work :twilightsmile:

question:

are the Crusaders in this story as old as in that S9 episode where they turned into grown-ups or are they slighty younger?

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Hiiiii!

All my characters are of legal consenting age, hence the reason for Rarity feeling old and running out of time to start a family of her own :raritywink:

I hope you're enjoying my story so far

Uhh ... what happened to Chapter Nine?

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Apologies for that boomcpg, it seems it became unpublished however I have righted that wrong.

Serves me right for re-reading for fresh ideas on my handheld device for my latest chapter.

Thank you again for letting me know darling! :raritystarry:

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Hey darling!

I'm pleased to say that I will be continuing Black Diamond very soon :twilightsmile:

I'm sorry to you and my other lovely readers for the delay with the story, just life and work getting in the way.

:raritywink:

Hey darling's,
Thank you for being so patient, I've just been so busy with work, I've just made a small extension to chapter 12!

Chapter 13 is coming very soon! :raritystarry:

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I'm sorry for the delay, I have a spot of writers block at the moment, but hopefully shan't be to long a wait now darling :raritywink:

Wow you're Black Diamond story is really Ms Rarity I've finish chapters 1 and 2 :raritywink:

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Thank you agron989, I hope you enjoy the rest of my story :twilightsmile::raritywink:

Wow. These fillys are seriously horny now:twilightblush: I like it~

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