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OhNoHesUseless


Idk what I’m doing

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Bois and gents, thing are about to get interesting

Why find Starlight anyway?

I'm partway through chapter one and I'm surprised this isn't more popular; the prose is good, the human characters we're working with are a dynamic I don't think I've seen before, the POV character is a cynical git without being overbearing. This is a really good start!

" I’d tried to explain to the princesses about getting some painkillers, but I was essentially told to go away. "
Wow, what the hell? They drag this guy to another world, with some 4 year old innocent bystanders, to fight under their banner, and they won't give him a goddamn aspirin?

This should have had more views it's better than a lot of fan fics out there for certain.

Why do the ponies act as if David is Eve and Evas parent? I am genuinely curious

They magically bound him to something before explaining what was going to happen? That tracks for Celestia, but I expect better from Luna.

MC is taking the situation rather well…

What does the cover art have to do with the story?

You respond to comments by moving your mouse over to the right-hand corner of the comment you want to reply to and clicking on the >> that appears. Will there be any badass little girls in this story?

I wish David can say no to Celestia just this once

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Ah yeah I’ve not really been all too dedicated to this story, so sorry about that.
For the girls, things will change for them, yes

Oh yeah, any sexual activity will be human/pony. C’mon now.

What’s up with the “c’mon now?”

Why do they always say the kids are his when they arent?

I was honestly expecting him to crack earlier, still it was interesting to see the dam break.

Boooo! Fight to return home! Human superiority! Human superiority!

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