(6/26/2022, this is based on a dream I had when waking up this morning.)
Years after her failure to get into Celestia's school for gifted unicorns, Twilight now owns the most successful Apple Cider factory in all of Equestria.
So why then, is she just sitting atop her throne, coldly waiting for... something... or somepony...
For the record, I woke up, had breakfast, and then went straight into writing this
Good story, could use a little polishing but still good quality.
Okay. Cool...
Shouldn't that be Twilight Sparkle's cutie mark on that factory in the cover art, then?
Well then. "Sparkle Apple Factory" seems like it should be up there with Cupcakes and Rainbow Factory purely off its set-up. This was unsettling to read. I loved every second of it.
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Twilight does not have a Cutie Mark here, so I used the Cutie Mark's of her mother and father.
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I will never tell anybody what my real ship is to make it seem cooler then really is.
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Thank you, that means a lot to me!
Hm. Good on you, sis. Interesting... Somewhere, a new GrimDark universe has opened up and you're responsible for its' existence.
Jokes aside, well done.
I give this a 6/10
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Better then nothing :)
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Thank you!
Very good read! Dreams are such an interesting topic to me and anything based off of them is a blast to read/listen to! Nice one!