[Read at your own risk. This was my first fanfiction, and to be honest, it's pretty terrible. I'm only going to leave it up to show how much I've improved.] A young, world weary entrepreneur died in a traffic accident. His body is mysteriously teleported into Equestria, and he is revived as a result. Will he be able to put his hatred of his old world behind him and move on, or will he change Equestria forever?
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EDIT: Although if I were you, I would put that last A/N part in a comment rather that at the end; it's a bit jarring to see it there, and besides, it's a bit of a statement of the obvious, for a HiE story. But that is all that I can say is wrong :)
he better be carefull or hes fucked...
intruiging
this is way better then my writing
lol mlp chan ad
touching moment AT END
why do i feel like wanna leave cause it need dem updates
lol little piggies i feel so imature
rainbow dash is in charecter but shouldnt rainbow know by now that seth cant fly wait did i read that wrong probably
why am i the only oe commenting man now i feel special
aww hes a pony i dony like human becoming ponies its just used way too much
why do most of the hie fics make the human into ponies in the 1-8 chapter its soo anoying! please change him back if you dont it will get boring to me and i will evetuintley leave this fic
sorry didnt read whole chapter
sorry for outurst last chapter was really tired and didnt understand
Plus Seth can't walk on clouds.
Hello everyone. I'm glad that my story has been well received here. I am literally brand new to this site and hope I am not causing offense by writing a comment on my own story
If I am, I blame my relative awkwardness in posting on my own stuff.
Anyway, I will be uploading two more chapters as soon as I can, and hopefully another chapter daily.
Words are hard.
Goodbye.
Dun dun dunnnnnn.......
Aw..Seth gonna get a scolding.
shit just got real
Don't you dare stop expanding this wonderful adventure because it would upset me deeply
They don't call me steve is mad for nothing you know
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Don't worry, I will be writing the next few chapters sometime soon. Currently waiting on my new story being accepted by the moderators
Ponified? Gaaaaaay, I'm out.
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Read further in. It doesn't last long.
Totally underrated story. Awesome though.