Raindrops was an ordinary weather seraph in Ponyville, until she met 'The Butcher'. Now forced into the shadowy underworld of Equestria, Raindrops must try to salvage a new life for herself while desperately holding onto what humanity she has left.
Humanized FiM x World of Darkness crossover.
Thanks go out to Totallynotabrony for giving me some advice about this story and inspiring me with his vampire Cheerilee.
FiM ©Hasbro and World of Darkness ©White Wolf Publishing
I like the Disturbed cover image of The Guy, so I'll give it a read later.
Okay, I'll give you my thoughts as I read:
Punctuation needs a little work. Things like "it's" versus "its" and comma placement.
A pair of pants is spelled jeans, not genes.
I honestly can't find much else wrong with it. Maybe people just don't like humanization.
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