Santa had a heart attack, so Celestria asked Rainbow Dash to do his job this Christmas to not let the young fillies down.
Hello, I am Count_Pony001. I like to write and draw. I am also a Christan. May God bless you today.
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Because it's a name "Rainbow Dash" needs to be capitalized in the description.
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So, this story had a cute premise, but that's pretty much the only good thing I can say about it. You had some serious mechanical issues throughout (grammar, spelling, formatting, etc), not to mention the whole thing being way too fast-paced. Also, you have the horror tag on this for some reason? I think this could have been really good if you had put in the effort to fix these issues, but as it is, it's not enjoyable at all.