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Great story! Thank you so much!
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No problem. Although, was there anything more specific? What was good, bad, or could use improving? Was there anything you were hoping to see, or were surprised by? As said, I don't normally do endo, so I'd like to know how well this turned out from a more frequent consumer.
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Honesty between the group sex and the endo it was a decent mix. Normally I'm more focused on the endo portion, but you did a great job. I don't really have any complaints.
Pretty solid work. I'm not much for smut myself but I appreciate the work that went into the narrative. Plus bonus points for making it Equestria Girls which has very few shrinking stories (even fewer that bother with a narrative).
So, quick question. Was the milk container a bottle or a carton? It kept saying carton, but it's indicated it's transparent, indicating this was plastic while normal cartons are cardboard.
Also, at one point, you wrote, "hi" instead of "high".
Still, really liked this story and hope to see more.