“The real question is, why would anyone send us pooltoy versions of them of all ponies?”
“Ah think the real real question is, who in their right mind inflates a pooltoy before boxing it up in the mail? These big boxes are expensive.”
The CMC get a special delivery to her clubhouse, part of an elaborate magical prank by Diamond Tiara, Silver Spoon and Babs Seed.
Tagalong story (and expansion) to a trio of commissions I got from The Furry Railfan.
Not a clopfic, but I won't pretend there aren't a lot of kinks involved in this.
Story includes pooltoys, pooltoy tf, inflation, partial inflation, possession, partial possession, reality alteration, light hypno/mc, silly outfits, diapers and general silliness.
This is so hot and amazing!!!!! I love it very much!!! I love the inflations, the Hypnos, and the transformations! any chance we can have more misadventures with the Mane Six and hypno inflatables?
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Glad you like it and thank you for the comment~!
The second part will have at least some of the Mane Six and some more inflatables. But if you want lots more hypno and inflation and don't mind more diapers and other assorted silliness, I just today finished writing two very long stories with MintyCandy (who co-authored Arbanis' Nightwear Moon/Dream Cycle series, if you know that one).
Was thinking to start posting the first of those this weekend, probably.
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Dude!!!!!! I love the Dream Cycle/Nightwear Moon series!!!!! I wanna see those!!!!!! pretty please!
Also im excited for the next chapter!!!
Okay, that was a good one. XD
The one thing I'm curious about is if this takes place pre or post Crusaders of the Lost Mark.
Pre makes more sense, but depending on the intent of the prank, it could be post.
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I am known to have at least a single good joke in every attempt-at-comedy fic I write. =w=
It's good to see you again though and I'm glad you enjoy the story so far. Thank you for the comment.
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It's pre-cutie-marks for them. Partially because there's still a criminal lack of prank war fics between these two groups and also because it was easier for the artist that way.
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Understandable
This was really good. Looking forward to what you release next!
So when will next chapter be out?
Are you going to continue this?
NGL, the first chapter had kinda left me wanting, so I'm glad to see more and I wouldn't be averse to further continuations.
Damn. How did I not notice that you uploaded?
Anyway, oh gosh, what a lovely read. Definitely would love to see some more silliness from you, especially if it'll be related to that prank book of Twilight's.
And what about Babslejack, Diamond Dash, and Silvarity? I'm sure the mischievous trio didn't just leave them be without having any fun once they've gotten ahold of them~
This pic is definitely my favorite of the three!
10810717 Sex, huh? Yes, I would love that, especially given all of the emphasis on their butts!
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When did anyone say anything about sex?
Besides, silliness is imo usually best left SFW-ish, anything more than genitals being used for even more puffing often gets in the way.
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My bad.
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It's a very fun pic~
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Thank you for the comment. I'm sure they had some fun but mostly they were setting up the prank for the CMC.
And yes, silliness doesn't have to be NSFW to be fun. It does open some more avenues but in this case it was more than enough fun.
The original idea was that if there's a sequel it'd start with the CMC going to Zecora for help, but the prank book could be pretty fun, too. I wonder if Haycartes' Method is one of the spells in there.
10827162 Yes, it is!
If the sequel came out, I'd love it if the sisters were involved in the prank war as well, since they ended up as casualties in it.
Especially Dash
Yes bounce chapters, please.