Writing sometimes just can't accurately express exactly how one feels inside. Pinkie's father knows that all too well.
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Clyde Richard Pie
521 Dirt Road
Outskirts of Ponyville, Equestria
Pinkamena Diane Pie
671 Sugarcube Lane
Ponyville, Equestria
Well this was well written and a little shocking, you get a like.
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Good job, you added quite a bit of depth to Pinkie Pie's father.
As Pinkie Pie looked at her fathers note, she smiled, grabbed a pencil and paper and began writing to her father. Once finished, she held it up to the light and read it out loud.
"Dear father,
What the hay am I reading? Get over here so we can throw you a party!
Your daughter and good friend, Pinkie Pie!"
i loved this, it made me feel a little bit. i kinda want to see pinkie's response to this, i have a feeling she would just show up on his doorstep and throw him a party with her friends. At least, something along those lines. i really liked this
Wow... I choked up a bit reading this. Wasn't expecting that.
1217553 OH MER GERD ERTS CERNAGE!
1220225 BRILLIANT!
Look you have received two more likes, hooray!
I'm torn on this. On the one hand I liked how it started (and I like stories that try to tackle the more or less ignored side characters), and the first few one-lines were a nice touch.
I think around the time you killed Inkie and Blinkie, though, you were dropping the hammer a little to hard for such a short story. Maybe if the story had been stretched over several letters (with some sort of plot device keeping the letters from getting through). Some good news interspersed throughout.
I mean, life isn't all getting beaten around the face with a baseball bat, even on a rock farm.