Cars are still parked outside. If the rapture had happened, why was it unrecognizable? Why was the sky blue? Why did no one tell me? Do these things not announce themselves?
Lightning Dust’s life has been a perpetual mess. As she struggles to put her life back together and repair her relationships, the last thing she needs is another version of herself appearing on her doorstep.
There's a bear in Raindrops' life. She wishes there wasn't.
A Frankenstien of two Quills and Sofas panic fiction entries I found lying around and realized I never did anything with. So I spliced them together to form one story.
This is a really good look at the whole what-happens-after-a-breakup-but-you're-still-friends thing. It's a tricky situation to be in, that's for sure. I feel for both Raindrops and Berry.
I need to learn from your characterisation of setting. You're good at that, the characters themselves notwithstanding.
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Funnily enough, both parts of this piece started as character pieces, most of the scenic elements I added in post to tie it all together :U
Thanks for reading!
This is a really good look at the whole what-happens-after-a-breakup-but-you're-still-friends thing. It's a tricky situation to be in, that's for sure. I feel for both Raindrops and Berry.
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Thank you silent ^^
This was combined really well. You did a great job.
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Thank you ^^