Twenty years ago, Twilight horribly botched Luna's rescue from the moon. Ten years ago, trying to save Derpy and Dinky, Twilight cast a forbidden spell she now deeply regrets. Today, Twilight wonders if she can ever make things right.
This story should make sense on its own. (But it's related to "Family on the Run: Derpy the Fugitive.")
This was a nice story, I enjoyed it. Is there going to be a sequel, because the ending felt like there would be more coming.
Nice work! Loved how Twilight struggled with the possiböe consequences
I just fixed a link to another story.
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Abd that would be?
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MagnetBolt's "Ask Not the Sparrow," which my Author's Note says something about. It's a good story.
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Okay
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I'd like to thank everyone for your comments! They are constructive but not criticism.
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You're welcome!