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SplatterPhoenix


It's probably all gonna be NSFW.

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Comments ( 14 )

More set-up than smut, really.

You son of a bitch, I'm in.

2786433 Dammit Pascal!

(I feel like somehow, this is a little bit your fault. So thank you.)

Good stuff, by drawing out the interactions the characters feel more 'real', that you didnt have dress them up with big overcomplicated words, bravo

Why does this feel so... wholesome-ish?

Pretty sweet concept, looking forward to seeing where you take this dude.

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There's two sequels in the final editing passes and I'm working on another story set a few years down the line, in early show canon.


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I'm trying to make a virtue of my tendency towards meandering slice of life stuff.

This is the start of something incredible.

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Ayyyy, lookin forward to these!

Derpys milk
You caught my attention.
They grow when the talk of feeding the entire town comes up.
......... More! :pinkiecrazy:

She very nearly cried with happiness. Her body had become a miracle of pleasure and endless abundance, she had her best friend at her side, and their daughters were a joy to raise. "I feel like the luckiest pony in the world when you hold me."

Derpy felt her the milk churn within her breasts as her nipples stiffened.

Suddenly it was easy to imagine herself with a pair of enormous milk factories,

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Thanks for pointing out those mistakes.

but its size merely uncommonly big for a mare of her tribe and build.

It’s a fine story, but it is kinda frustrating that a lot of the time it’s not clear who is saying what. You really should follow up each sentence with a Derpy said or Berry said to make it clear who’s talking.

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