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Omegathyst
Female Writer, Bisexual Writer, Smolder X Mare Crackship Connoisseur. Creator of the Smolderverse, and writer of many other kinds of clop and SFW stories (Commissions temporarily OPEN)
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Gotta say, Sugar came across as EXTREMELY un-likeable In the last story, so glad to see her facing some repercussions for her decisions.
Edit: Also, if they had a safeword, and Sugar didn’t use it despite being in pain, she’s just as much to blame as Big Mac, if not more. The way you portray him here, he would’ve stopped INSTANTLY if she ever said it.
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Understandable. Of course, the way that Sugar Belle and Yona got together was nothing short of reckless and inconsiderate to the ponies around them. So naturally, there's a lot of repercussions to that hookup. It's unfortunate that instead of using the safeword and communicating, Sugar Belle only focused on what she wanted and what would make her happy. Which, while it isn't wrong to go after what makes you happy, she purposefully kept Big Mac in the dark about it due to the resentment and pain she had felt. In short, people do a lot of stupid and hurtful shit when they're bitter.
Also, if I may ask, what's your take on Yona in this series?
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Besides the rather quick way she got together with Sugar, I don’t really have a problem with Yona in this tale. Though the way she passively encourages Sugar’s behavior is a bit annoying as well. I hope things don’t go as bad for her as they do Sugar.
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People do stupid things when they're bitter, sure, but then there's Sugar Belle here....
It's pretty much all been said, but I REALLY have to comment that she's still on a level of her own, even for a cheater. It wasn't AJ's place to tell Yona she was married? Bitch, you're absolutely right, because it was YOUR place to tell her that and AJ telling her shouldn't have mattered!
Then there's the casual use of Yona as a threat? Not that Yona would protect her, but straight up that Yona will murder them if they so much as touch her, or her things.
Sugar Belle is distinctly unlikeable here. And I hope that that's what you were aiming for, but I'm not sure?
As for Yona... I feel bad for her, honestly. Sure, she knows what she's doing at this point, but she's also in the "young and dumb" category in this. She was complicit in the cheating, but it's clear from his his that she's also been getting the rather one-sided version of things from SB for what she does know about it.
Yona's making bad choices, but she isn't actively picking the worst way to handle her problems either. And I can't help but think she's gonna need a hug really bad before this is all over.
Prediction: Sugar Belle will at some point sabotage her relationship with Yona. Although Sugar does seem happier right now, she also seemed pretty happy at the beginning of relationship with Big Mac, too. Ultimately, she's going to make the same mistake: she'll refuse to mention what's bothering her until it drives her nuts, and then she'll blame Yona for everything. I suspect she'll then do the same thing with whoever she hooks up with after Yona, too.
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I think Cadence and Twilight, who are very good Experts on Love and Friendship. Should really have a LONG talk to Sugar Belle, before she become a BIGGER Bitch, a Cheater, and make everyone/everypony DESPISED her more. Because, Big Mac and others didn't deserve that mess up crap. Basically, I'm NOT against Female x Female, BUT isn't there a way to make both parties happy? Can't they try a three way, or a Harem like the other Stories. 
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Damn!!!
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Since Sugar Belle and Yona are both lesbians in this story, and therefore aren't attracted to males, the three-way/harem idea wouldn't work.
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Oh. But, those two are still CRUSHING their Relationships and Friendships, and being VERY rude and threatening the others for NO reason!!! So they BETTER deal with the Consequences.
P.S. How would Twilight, Mane 5, the Royal Sisters, Cadence, and the Pillars react to this? Since the Young Six are SUPPOSED to be the New/Next Gen. Of the Heroes/Protectors of Equestria with the Elements. But with this occurring, their Friendship is down the drain. 👎 🤦 😞
And a New Villain can USE this Opportunity?