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CategoricalGrant


"I haven't seen a bigger waste of talent since Dan Marino." -Lucky Seven; Want to support me?

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Hearth's Warming Eve has brought the Apple and Pie families together for the past several years, sometimes for better and sometimes for worse.

Up late at night, Marble Pie doesn't know if any of it is for the better.

Written based on a general character/subject request for my very generous supporter IReadYouWrite.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 9 )

This is everything I wanted and more. I don't know how you do it, but you always exceed my expectations. Thank you so much for taking time to make this story for me. This was absolutely fantastic.

9871805
BIG words. I'm really glad you enjoyed- I wasn't sure how the dialogue-less style would turn out :pinkiegasp:

9871840
I wasn't expecting it, but it really brought out the feels. Lol there's probably a better word for it, but that's my point. :rainbowlaugh:

Sad but enlightening. Hopefully Marble gets somepony.

-Hugging is the best prescription to any occasions
-Side effects including; Tears of joy, pony fluff, returned hug and/or gentle nuzzling of nose
Heck yeah

At first, I thought this was a horror or something. I’m not entirely sure why; I think it was something about the eerily calm atmosphere. I had to keep checking to make sure it was a Grant cuddle-fic. Then the conciliatory snugs began and I realized where I was.

Poor Marble. I kinda want to see her pull a Fluttershy and have an angry side. “Sugar Belle, you whore!”

A bittersweet yet heartwarming tale with a ray of hope in the ending.

Let's hope Marble Pie will find her own happy ending (and maybe a special somepony) in the upcoming Season 10 comic books (https://www.equestriadaily.com/2019/10/idw-my-little-pony-season-10-comic.html and https://www.equestriadaily.com/2019/10/nycc-interview-bobby-curnow-on-my.html).

This was very heartwarming.

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