• Published 29th Mar 2019
  • 3,217 Views, 22 Comments

Pull Me Closer - Barley Citrus



With the arrival of Spring, the girls' desires look to be in full bloom: Twilight is making love to Rarity, Sunset is getting regularly laid by Rainbow and things have settled into a rhythm. But Spring also has some surprises for the girls.

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Comments ( 11 )

Congrats. You're more or less one of the very few to make me kinda enjoy futa.

~Skeeter The Lurker

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I'm glad
There's definitely a shortage of quality futa

Can I ask what makes it more enjoyable for you?
What do you like about the way I write it?

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It felt natural.

Which is really weird as I dislike when it's "born with" but am ok with "magically done".

Also helps that's its written super fucking hot.

~Skeeter The Lurker

Holy shit I loved this. I'm so happy for Rainbow Dash :heart:

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Agreed. Honestly this is one of a few futa works I'll keep up with, which can be counted with less than one hand.

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I'm glad you liked it
I'd love to hear what made you really love it?
What stood out to you?

I’m actually wondering how Sunset is taking this, considering. And if she and AJ are gonna end up a thing. And what poor Flutters and Pinkie are gonna think if/when they find out!

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Well the sequel is going to focus on Sunset
So buckle in for the ride

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Just wanted to let you know
If you've already read the final chapter:: Coming Together
I have altered the ending (roughly the last 500 words of it)
Consider rereading at least that part of it for the canon ending

Or if you haven't finished reading it yet, then enjoy

Comment posted by Harriet_Farrar deleted May 8th, 2020

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Oh, that makes more sense, thanks for simplifying it, I can't wait to see how sunsets and rainbows thing progresses with the next chapter, also you have done a fantastic job of writing one of the cutest RD's that I've read so far

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