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Alphamon_Ouryuken


"I am the Aloof Hermit, the Lord of the Empty Seat. I am the Alpha and the Omega"

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You are what you eat

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Great work keep it up

If this is what I think it is, you've got my attention

Comment posted by Phantom-Dragon deleted Mar 4th, 2020

cant wait to see where this is going

This is pretty great, makes me wish I were more into vore

I want to see more of this, This should be good.

...Why do I expect Scootaloo to be into it?
Not sexually, but that she thinks it's neat and wants to try it out for herself, and that her initial reaction is more a sense of outrage at them not telling her that they were lamia.

lead by a stuck-up unicorn who saw my kind as a threat and sealed me away in that necklace when I opposed him.

Starswirl? She might be surprised that old coot is still alive.

To bad for Button Mash, he let that hot piece of tail get away

why would Button Mash even want to look in my direction

No offense to anyone, but Sweetie Belle is way beyond this dork's league.

do Diamond and Silver have Lamia forms or powers?

'Well then, I do believe that securing and converting the wielders of these Elements should be our first priority.' Nadira chimed in, trying to get things back on topic.

I have a feeling the Elements might either give the bearers Lamia form with wings or reform Nadira at some point. Personally, I don't see Nadira as a bad person as Chrysalis or the Sirens. She just need to change her approach a bit and more volunteers would come to her instead - since ponies nowadays have more kinks now than ever before.

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Nope, they're just 100% loyal to the Lamias.

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winged lamias woudl be awesome,
oooh or what if wings, AND also make them the ultimate form of lamias, a marilith? it might seem weird with pony upper bodies but on the other hand theres a mythical precedent of the 8-legged horse god sleipnir, so if u subract the 2 legs that become the tail, a pony marilith woudl be like a naga form of sleipnir, itd basically be the goddess form of both the naga and the pony at the same time. and if wings and horns with it, itd be the goddess form of the unicorn, the alicorn, as well. triple goddess!

This queen is doing a much better job than Chrysalis did. She had the mind control down but forgot the rogues. Rookie mistake, never forget the orgies.

Kaa eat your heart out.

First

If the rest of this isn't going to be posted on fimfiction you should probably mark it canceled or at least post a final separate chapter that explains where the rest of it is.

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The rest will still be uploaded on fimfiction, it will just be uploaded on a different site first.

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Ah. I'm not sure that was clear from your note.

I'm looking forward to the finale and I doubt that Twilight will be the only pony that will be targeted in that chapter.

No Epilogue with Celestia and Luna?

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Decided to leave things a little open-ended.

I thought Twilight hated snakes?

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Twilight is terrified of snakes. her fear would over-ride the hypnosis. Especially when she was penetrated by the tail, or got anywhere near the mouth. She'd have snapped out of it in a second and woken up, even from a magically induced sleep. Nightmare's are powerful things.

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Not really, this is due to the fact that they infected with her with the venom first. As a result it ended up overriding any mental barriers or hangups she might have had.

I was kind hoping to see a scene with Rarity holding an egg cause spike knocked her up when she changed him.

Not wasting a second she quickly moved behind it, she peeked out from behind and saw the two of them were still arguing.

almost as if he was as if she was meant to wear it herself.

second she could have swore that her eyes were slitted…

The young foal had a shiver go down her back as she looked around. "W-Who's there?"

While she was suspicious as to what a temple was doing in the middle of the jungle,

Apple Bloom gulped as she tried to nervously step backwards,

and her slitted eyes were lime green in color.

The Queen of all Lamias to be precissse~"

As she said this, her eyes went from slitted pupils to two blossoming array of colors,(—— displayed

she did seem a little more curvaceous than it used to be.

Bloom had it been wearing.

Scootaloo smiled, giving her a friendly hug. "Thanks, Apple Bloom! I'll see you later today!”(—— She said before rushing down the dirt road towards Ponyville.

for decades was a chance too tempting to simply pass up. "Well…"

"He'd probably just start tapping his JoyBoy and wondering why there isn't a cheat code to skip to the end credits!" Silver Spoon started laughing.

"So… what do we do with these two?”(—— Sweetie Belle asked

"I mean, hypnotizing them was fun and all, but something tells me and this isn't going to last forever…"

transported to a realm of swirling green clouds.(——

the Pegasus moaning as the Lamia's tongue curled dominantly around Scootaloo’s own,

a green aura and the venom started altering her body.

The rainbow-maned Pegasus let out a tired yawn as she rubbed her eyes, the moment she adjusted her vision she was greeted by the sight of her marefriend. "Ugh… hey AJ, what's up?"

"I'll go downstairs and make sure none of the animals interrupt you."

she quickly moved the snake half of her body behind the bed.

The footsteps immediately rushed past her hiding space and straight towards the door leading outside,

Edit 4/19/2021:

"Just look into our eyesss~"

"That's it Spikey! Let it all out, cum inside me like the beast you are,”(—— she gasped out.

vanished from sight they seemed to stop and circle in place, swimming through the air as if beckoning Twilight to follow them.

As they pulled away she felt a large bite mark

it's all you need…"

The tail stretched more of itself out before the tip went towards her and caressed her cheek,

Bonbon could only bite her lips as she looked around,

I would love to see a sequel.

Alright, an interesting and sensual start. Let's see where it goes.

a book with a cover that depicted a six-fingered hand and the number 3 in the center

Haha, that’s a pretty good one!

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Fair point. I do want to see a sequel to this to be honest. Twi and friends getting even more ponies. Like Celestia. Luna. Cadance. Shining... the list goes on. Maybe even Discord. Imagine Queen Twilight with Discord as one of her Lamia.

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