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Sage the Ero Harem Kami

"It is my sworn duty to protect the harmony of the Haremverse but if ones so salty try to disrupt this harmony in any way, THO SHALL GET RIGIDITY WREAKED BITCH BOI!"

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Oops door
Oops door #2 · Oct 28th, 2018 · · · Chapter 1: A Prayer is Answered ·
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Next time on Dragonball Z

dracone
dracone #4 · Oct 28th, 2018 · · · Chapter 1: A Prayer is Answered ·
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Your short summary has some typos, that usually doesn’t bode well for the work itself

Golden Fang Ryu Shenron
Golden Fang Ryu Shenron #6 · Oct 28th, 2018 · · 2 · Chapter 1: A Prayer is Answered ·
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Ok, I'm already liking this:pinkiehappy:!

"Nightmare Moon I challenge you to a one on one honor duel," Daydreamer said in a clear strong voice.

"WHAT?!" The Mane6 scream out while Celestia stares on with wide eyes. Nightmare, on the other hand, is grinning evilly while laughing

HA, that'd be my reaction:rainbowlaugh:! That is, if I didn't know what DD's powers were:ajsmug:.

'Oh. My. Faust! He moved so fast I didn't even see him move till the last minute!!' Rainbow Dash thought with glee. 'Note to self: ask him to race me because I gotta see how fast he can go to keep up with me!'

That'd be so epic:pinkiehappy:!!!

'How could he move that fast and be that strong?! No Earth Pony in recorded history can move that fast nor are that strong! I'll have to run some test on him whenever I get the chance,' Twilight thought already coming up with all kinds of experiments to run on her newest test subject. All in the name of science of course.

Twilight, you'd better not go over the top...:ajbemused:. I've seen just how curious you are about certain things...:facehoof:.

'I'm sure am glad Granny Smith ain't here to see this otherwise she'd be demanding me to claim that stallion as my own for his strength alone,' AppleJack thought with a blush. 'Although I'd be lying if I said I wasn't really against it.'

Whoa, seriously:applejackconfused:?! Wait, what am I thinking, this is Granny Smith we're talking about, of course she would do something like that:derpytongue2:.

'Wowie zowie! Daydreamer sure is strong to be able to knock Moony into the air and then slam her into the ground to make a really big crater!' Pinkie though excitedly bouncing in place. 'I wonder when he's gonna show off his super cool po- oopsie! Sorry readers, no spoilers yet that's not gonna be shown until the next chapter!'

Only you Pinkie, only you:pinkiesmile:.

'Oh my he's so strong, I wonder if he puts that kind of power into his thrusts when he's mounting a mare?' Fluttershy thought with bright blush while giggling perversely in her head. 'Maybe I can thank him after all this is over with my very special service I've been wanting to try on something other than toys.'

Whoa...:rainbowderp:...Fluttershy's acting unusually perverted...I love it:rainbowlaugh:!!! It's always the quiet ones...:ajsmug:.

'Who are you really Daydreamer?' Celestia asked herself. Her eyes traveled over Daydreamer's form before they landed on his back and the widen slightly. 'Of course that explains some things, you're all the way from Ursa Country. But what brings you all the way out here?'

Ursa Country:rainbowderp:? I guess that must be a land far beyond Equestria...:applejackunsure:.

This is an awesome start, Day, keep going:rainbowdetermined2:!!!

Comnislasher
Comnislasher #7 · Oct 28th, 2018 · · · Chapter 1: A Prayer is Answered ·
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Such a blatant wsh fulfillment SI.

Asolem2
Asolem2 #12 · Oct 28th, 2018 · · · Chapter 1: A Prayer is Answered ·
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"HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!! DID YOU REALLY THINK THAT A BUNCH OF FILLIES COULD HAVE BEATEN ME CELESTIA?! YOUR MIND MUST HAVE ROTTEN OVER THE PAST THOUSAND YEARS TO THINK THAT!!" Nightmare Moon cackled evilly in the royal canterlot voice.

You know she does actually have a point :moustache:

"While that sort of language isn't something I would use my friend is absolutely right," Rarity said. "I would think that a so-called queen such as yourself would have some code of honor. But I guess someone as brutish and unladylike as you wouldn't know a thing about honor now would you."

I really like this Rarity :pinkiecrazy:

'Oh my he's so strong, I wonder if he puts that kind of power into his thrusts when he's mounting a mare?' Fluttershy thought with bright blush while giggling perversely in her head. 'Maybe I can thank him after all this is over with my very special service I've been wanting to try on something other than toys.'

Okay, slowly backing away now :unsuresweetie:

Sage the Ero Harem Kami
Sage the Ero Harem Kami #13 · Oct 28th, 2018 · · 3 · Chapter 1: A Prayer is Answered ·
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9257646
I did say in the warning that Fluttershy was gonna be a perv dude and to enter at your own risk. You walked into that one.

Resadur164
Resadur164 #14 · Oct 28th, 2018 · · · Chapter 1: A Prayer is Answered ·
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interesting very interesting

Asolem2
Asolem2 #17 · Oct 28th, 2018 · · · Chapter 1: A Prayer is Answered ·
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9257658
I know, i made that comment for laughs :pinkiehappy:

Sage the Ero Harem Kami
Sage the Ero Harem Kami #18 · Oct 28th, 2018 · · 1 · Chapter 1: A Prayer is Answered ·
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9257736
Good to know. Trust me when I say the next chapter is gonna be more action packed than this one.

DAMN HAMSTER
DAMN HAMSTER #21 · Oct 30th, 2018 · · 3 · Chapter 1: A Prayer is Answered ·
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9261982
Other than the Mary Sue OC, the forced dialogue, useless colored text, immersion killing video additions, the complete lack of Show Don't Tell, the numerous grammar errors, and the OOC?

Sage the Ero Harem Kami
Sage the Ero Harem Kami #22 · Oct 30th, 2018 · · · Chapter 1: A Prayer is Answered ·
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9262059
He only seem op right now because he caught Nightmare Moon off guard but his fight is gonna be a lot harder.

Lord erigon
Lord erigon #23 · Nov 4th, 2018 · · · Chapter 1: A Prayer is Answered ·
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9262064
Oi even if it was Mary Sue then it be my first one

Master king
Master king #25 · Nov 20th, 2018 · · · Chapter 1: A Prayer is Answered ·
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This is so aweso far can't wait to see where it goes.

Sage the Ero Harem Kami
Sage the Ero Harem Kami #26 · Nov 20th, 2018 · · · Chapter 1: A Prayer is Answered ·
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9304377
I'm working on the next chapter now and trust me when I say it's gonna get crazy as hell.

Master king
Master king #29 · Nov 20th, 2018 · · · Chapter 1: A Prayer is Answered ·
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9304386 Mostly his intro and by reading this much you can tell what happens next will be epic.hope its as awesome and sweet read as the other.

DuskShadowx
DuskShadowx #31 · Dec 10th, 2018 · · · Chapter 1: A Prayer is Answered ·
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Ok wtf did I just read? Loved ur oc daydreamer. Keep going plz cause I wants more

Charles Farrow
Charles Farrow #36 · Dec 25th, 2018 · · · Chapter 1: A Prayer is Answered ·
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9365850
Just mentally preparing myself for what's ahead with the tags and your warnings n' all. As you said "enter at your own risk".
Less see what ya got here :moustache:

Also a subtle reference to Gaster from Undertale.

Oops door
Oops door #38 · Sep 28th, 2019 · · · Chapter 1: A Prayer is Answered ·
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The good a old good store takes a long break trope gets me every time .:trixieshiftleft:

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