This story is a sequel to Recovering
Gilda tries to take it out on Rainbow again. But with six friends on her side, Gilda would need to bring in company to make it a fair fight. Right?
Thanks to Waspinator331 who suggested I write this!😀
This story is a sequel to Recovering
Gilda tries to take it out on Rainbow again. But with six friends on her side, Gilda would need to bring in company to make it a fair fight. Right?
Thanks to Waspinator331 who suggested I write this!😀
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My only complaint is that the structure is very poor. You need a new paragraph each time someone speaks.
Also, the way the dialog was written was hella wack. It has to be like this:
Otherwise, it just looks weird.
Go back through it for typos, I saw a few. I know writing stories on a mobile device is weird, but if I can do it properly, so can you.
The story itself is good, I can see this being an episode. I'll still give it an A for effort.
9232022
Okay
9232033![:derpytongue2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/derpytongue2.png)
Keep up the good work. Nowhere to go but up.
9232038![:twilightsheepish:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsheepish.png)
Thanks
Shouldn’t I get at least a little bit of credit considering that I’m the one who gave you this idea?
It should be 'now' not 'noe'
9232097
. Thanks for pointing it out though.
Oh yeah. I actually did but I forgot to save after editing, sorry!!!
Here you go, done.
There is something wrong with me in that as soon as I saw “this time would be different”, the first response that came to mind was “It’s not different at all is it Steve?”
9232211
Huh?
Nevermind....
very love story i need read last one so im confustion but you are very good and i gave it 1 like!
9232361
Thanks!
9232371
ok
9232589
Thanks!!!!
Great story!
9237783
Thanks
Cool story 😎![:moustache:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/moustache.png)
Have a moustache.
Can I make a different ending to this?! Also HOW DO YOU WRITE STORIES?! I have been wanting to start typing up my own stories (I HAVE REALLY COOL IDEAS FOR SUNSET) but I just don't know how to even start. Mind telling me how?
Oh boy. 😬
She isn't, she has many hidden secrets that are great to know.![:ajsmug:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/ajsmug.png)
Jostling had to say that didn't you rainbow.![:facehoof:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/facehoof.png)
Should of guessed she'd bring back up this time.
Your busted now Gilda. 😠
Yep, it's just sad.
Now isn't that sweet?
...
I HATE Sweet.
It’s “be” not “br”