Who am I? Why, I'm just a passing through Kamen Rider... Got it memorized?
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Wait, Shining, come back, she’s awake! I liked the suspense in the ending, it was cool. Will there be a sequel or were you planning on making this a one part story?
This, good sir and/or madam, is tragedy done right. Kudos.
For one moment, I thought she dies after he left
WOW!
Ponies having embolisms... well ok then.
I first expected it to be brain damage from Shining throwing his wife at Sombra.
This is a well done little story. Hits a bit close to home, as all tragic stories should. The ending was a nice touch. Won't lie: I often worry what happened to Caddy here will happen to me.
PS - I found a typo that might could use your attention:
*were just in the job description* not *where*
*gone*
Refreshing that it was a health matter rather than a villain. And the ending was a nice touch.
This was a very well written out sad story.
We need a next chapter
Welcome back, Cadi.