This story is a sequel to From Twilight to Dusk
Everything seems to be perfect. Twilight has friends, a castle and a little colt to take care of. However, Twilight has never adapted to her new home. Despite the luxuries, she will never recover from the loss of her first home in Ponyville. Luckily for her, she has friends who care deeply about her, and will do anything to make their friend smile again.
This is the second story I write with no romance involved. I had fun writting it, but I'll return to write romance again. I feel more comfortable there
I had a lot of help with this story. My brother in arms, Windsor, provided ideas and revised the overall story. We wrote this story together
And, of course, Zalla661 edited this story, searching for any grammar errors I might have missed
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Awesome!
9130435 Thanks!
9130526your welcome
This was an awesome story you wrote!
The Golden Oak Library should never have been blown up, Hasbro fuck up on that part. But you brought it back, yay.
9133957 Yup! It should have been rebuilt. It was, and still is, Twilight's real home
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One of the biggest mistakes people didn't like. I didn't mind too much myself, but I liked the chandelier roots lights they made later. Kinda felt like a nod to the fans.
9141241 They shouldn't have destroyed her home to begin with. I could go all night listing the mistakes Hasbro made with both MLP and EqG, but I don't do that anymore.
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Yeah, that's media for you. You satisfy some and anger others. Its always a gamble when you change things. Lord knows I did that a few times in all my stories. Most notably when I killed Discord on my Dark Souls Crossover. Still regret putting him in it to this day. I really hate him.
Other than that, the story was nice. I definitely see that reading the first made this one a lot easier to follow knowing what happened prior for context. other than that nicely done.
9141265 Then you know how I felt when I had to write characters refering to Twilight by a title she should never have accepted. I feel your pain
Thanks! I'm glad you still enjoyed it
amazing