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This is pretty good, I'd like to see a story version of this.
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I'm actually considering it, though it would only be after Daedalus' New World is finished. I'm also toying with the idea of a second chapter, though it wouldn't be a clop one.
More ples :)
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we need more human x princesses stories which are more than only clop. pls write :)
Not bad,not bad at all.
Very Interesting Concept...... maybe slow the story down a bit and expand some parts? things seemed to happen REALLY fast even for a clopfic XD
Would love to see an expanded version of this concept explored in detail :3 nightmare moon and a character living together alone in the castle of the two sisters slowly growing to love one another XD .... yes... i would very much like to see some more versions of this concept :3
great story i hope you make a sequel where their night of passion leads nightmare to get pregnant after all when she absorbed his magic she absorbed part of his dna so her getting pregnant is possible
Sequal please.
Now*
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Thanks for that! That's one less error in the story for future readers.
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hey, I am your local grammar nazi C:
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You won't find me having any problems with that. My phone tends to misapply autocorrections and I read through so fast that I don't catch them.
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Try the google docs app, copy and paste it in
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Google docs is what I use to write in the first place. The spellcheck feature only works with internet connection and I don't always have access to the internet, which is my updating his been rather jerky recently.
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Ah, I mean, I could be a pm editor, got nothing bette- oh right I’m gonna make a FoE story
I'm sorry. It just moves far, far too fast and Nightmare is much too reasonable and open with the stranger she literally just met.
I would love to see this continued. While it moves a bit fast Ive had a plot bunny in the back of my head about either a human or a reincarnated human living in the castle pre cannon, not sure where it would go from there but I like your slice of life with Luna idea